Question

超简单的英语问题~

Never give up!The stories about “success" or “victory" in the world are already not few. Most of them indicate to us one bright way leading to a success. That is -never give up!
Many people know that Michael Jordan is the great American basketball athlete. Why can he become the world’s best basketball athlete? Because Jordan has a famous saying: “I may accept defeat, but I don’t accept giving up.”
When we say “Never give up”, that means we go ahead in the adverse circumstances.
When we say “Never give up”, that means even when we are in the advantageous circumstances, we still keep going on.
We should always keep in mind the four words. That is the glory for all of us. It also represents our spirit. So , let us speak out loudly : “Never give up”.

看看有没有语法错误或者要改的地方，谢谢。认真点！！50分！！！！！

Answer 1

第二句中 最好改成 There have already been many stories about "success " or “victory”in the world. 亲是要表达关于成功的故事已经不少了 ...are not few 比较符合中国人的表达习惯 但是不地道
第三句indicate to us 中的to 去掉 属于动词用法问题
第五句当中 乔丹是美国最伟大的篮球运动员 最好用最高级 篮球运动员 应为basketball player "athlete"多用来表示参加运动会之类的田径等类的运动员 所以此句可以改为 Many people know that Michael Jordan is the most famous basketball player.同样 后文中的athlete 最好改为 player
最后一段 glory 改为 motto 意为永不放弃是我们的格言 还有 Speak out 改为 Speak it out 。
我能发现的暂时就这些 希望能有所帮助。

Answer 2

The stories about “success" or “victory" in the world are already not few.这句用的not few不对 是要用“不多”吗？换一个吧，这个太别扭了

Most of them indicate to us one bright way leading to a success. That is -never give up!
建议改成Most of them indicate to us one bright way leading to success-never give up!

Many people know that Michael Jordan is the great American basketball athlete.
建议：the great改成the greatest或者a great当然我比较支持前者

That is the glory for all of us.
that代什么啊？？如果是the four words的话是复数吧？

Answer 3

1、Michael Jordan is the greatest American basketball athlete.
2、in adverse circumstances.
in advantageous circumstances
呃。其他应该没了吧~目前我就看出这么多~

Answer 4

Never give up!There are many stories about “success" or “victory" in the world, most of which indicate one bright way leading to success. That is ---Never Give Up!

Many people know that Michael Jordan is one of the greatest American basketball players. Why can he become the world’s best basketball player? One reason lies in that Jordan has a famous saying: “I may accept defeat, but I don’t accept giving up.”

When we say “Never give up”, that means we go ahead even in tough circumstances.

When we say “Never give up”, that means even when we are in the advantageous circumstances, we still keep going on.

We should always keep in mind the four words. That is the glory for all of us. It also represents our spirit. Therefore , let us speak out loudly : “Never give up”.

作者可能是要写一篇演讲稿吧，写得不错。稍加修改，希望对你有所帮助。

Answer 5

只是靠情态动词的题，因为他说了刚刚在那里看到ANY，所以语气是肯定的，用must
选C

Answer 6

a