Question

帮我改英文作文？谢谢

Answer 1

Two days ago
when I went to school
my friend
Jason told me today has dictation. I was scared because I haven't studied
so I studied very quickly before class. I feel scared as the English teacher said that the dictation was starting.[这句意义不大，惟有这样修改] Two days later
the teacher told us to collect the dictation result. When I went home and told a lie to mother
as a result she was angry because I didn't know there was a dictation. [她愤怒应该是由于你说谎而不是她不知道要默书，知道要默书是你的责任不是你妈]At the end
I told the truth to mother and said sorry. [用正面写法说你讲出真相并道歉，这样结束会好一点] 注:“I”永远都是大写的。Correct = 正确Collect = 收取/收集
Two days ago
when I went to school
my friend Jason told me that dictation was on that day. I was scared because I hadn't prepared for it. I was forced to study the text very quickly at the last minute before the class began. Panic seized me as the English teacher started to read out the text for dictation. Two days later
the teacher told us to get back the marked copy of our dictation. After going home
I told a lie to my mother for fear that she was angry. She didn’t know that I had a dictation on that day. 下列加落去: 纯粹地是个人意思. At the end
I couldn’t help blurting out the truth. Saying sorry seemed to be the hardest thing to do
but I finally plucked up my courage to say it to my mom. 注释: Panic (恐慌) seized me = I got into panic
不想使用太多 “I “ 字starting a sentence. couldn’t help = 忍不住 blurt out = 冲口说出 pluck up courage = 鼓起勇气 评论: 小心全篇要用 past tense
(neither present nor future) . Check all the verbs. 不能用 today 在 reported speech. 除非 direct speech. 作者没有说自己和 Jason 一起返学. 不知道几年班级? 否则可以就就.
Two days ago. I went to school with my friend Jason. He said to me: "We are going to have dictation today." I was begun to panic because I didn’t studied any at all. So I try my best to do the fast studied. When during at the English class the English teacher said: “The dictation is start now” I feel scared and worry. Two days after
my English teacher told us to receive dictation at the end of the class. I lie to my mother for I didn’t had any dictation today because I worry her will angry because I should know and study for the dictation. At the end
I feel panic and unhappy to myself. I shouldn’t lie to mother.
I went to school o days ago with my friend
Jason. He told me that day was the dictation day. I was scared as I was not prepared for it
so I tried to catch up in a very fast fashion. At the moment that the teacher started to dictate
the sense of fear overwhelmed me. The teacher told me o days later that she will correct the dictation. When I went home
I told a lie to my mother and she was angry about this incident. I decided from now on that I would not tell a lie to my mother.
参考: Myself