初中初一作文300字：MY Grandfather
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作文标题： MY Grandfather
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本作文是关于初中初一300字的作文，题目为：《MY Grandfather》，欢迎大家踊跃投稿。 My grandfather is very old. He is 72 years old. He is thin and short. His hair is white. He is a farmer. He gets up very early every day. He likes climbing and reading newspaper. He keeps doing morning exercises. My grandfather always tells me the story of his old days.I like my grandfather.名师点评：文章用英文介绍了自己的爷爷，从中我们知道爷爷是位农民，今年已经72岁了，比较瘦小，头发已经花白。爷爷每天起床很早，喜欢爬山和看新闻，坚持每天早上锻炼身体。建议将“He keeps doing morning exercises”放入“He gets up very early every day”之后，这样文章的逻辑性更强。文章最后表达了“自己”对爷爷的爱戴之情。“Ilikemygrandfather”要改为“I love my grandfather”。继续加油！
（学乐中国特聘教师：邹紫老师）2010-1-10 19:51:00
关 键 词： 初中初一 300字
字 数： 300字作文
本文适合： 初中初一
作文来源： https://zw.liuxue86.com
本作文是关于初中初一300字的作文，题目为：《MY Grandfather》，欢迎大家踊跃投稿。 My grandfather is very old. He is 72 years old. He is thin and short. His hair is white. He is a farmer. He gets up very early every day. He likes climbing and reading newspaper. He keeps doing morning exercises. My grandfather always tells me the story of his old days.I like my grandfather.名师点评：文章用英文介绍了自己的爷爷，从中我们知道爷爷是位农民，今年已经72岁了，比较瘦小，头发已经花白。爷爷每天起床很早，喜欢爬山和看新闻，坚持每天早上锻炼身体。建议将“He keeps doing morning exercises”放入“He gets up very early every day”之后，这样文章的逻辑性更强。文章最后表达了“自己”对爷爷的爱戴之情。“Ilikemygrandfather”要改为“I love my grandfather”。继续加油！
（学乐中国特聘教师：邹紫老师）2010-1-10 19:51:00
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