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The 41st World Expo will be held in Shanghai in 2010.The theme of the Shanghai Expo is “Better City , Better Life”. The mascot of the Shanghai Expo is HAIBAO. The shape of HAIBAO like “人” in Chinese. His has curly hair like wave. His eyes is very big, the big eyes contains the hope of the city , He is always smile , always say “Hi” to the people all over the world to invite them come to China. He is so lovely.
There are lots of building in the World Expo, they are so beautiful an colorful, I like the Happy Street of the Holland best. It is so colorful and lively , like a small town. It is a 400-metres-long street, the shape of the street like “8”, it has 26 small houses, each house has different design. Every house is a small museum. It shows the innovation of the Holland in science.
As a middle school student, we should do something for the World Expo. We could become a volunteer . As a volunteer, we should be friendly, when the foreigner get into trouble, we should help them immediately , we should protect the environment ,to make the city more beautiful, the slogan of volunteer is ” At Your Service at EXPO” , we should say it powerful and loudly to show the vigor of the Chinese student. So , let’s become a volunteer to make the World Expo successful.
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Answer 1

The 41st World Expo will be held in Shanghai in 2010.The theme of the Shanghai Expo is “Better City , Better Life”. The mascot of the Shanghai Expo is HAIBAO whose shape is like a Chinese character“人” . He has curly hair like waves. His eyes are very big in which contain the hope of the city , He is always smile , always say “Hi” to the people all over the world to invite them come to China. He is so lovely.
There are lots of buildings in the World Expo, they are so beautiful and colorful, I like the Happy Street of the Holland best. It is so colorful and vibrant , like a small town. It is a 400-metre-long street, the shape of the street like “8”, it has 26 small houses, each house has different design. Every house is a small museum. It shows the innovation of the Holland in science.
As a middle school student, we should do something for the World Expo. We could become a volunteer . As volunteers, we should be friendly, when the foreigner get into trouble, we should help them immediately , we should protect the environment to make the city more beautiful, the slogan of volunteers is ” At Your Service at EXPO” , we should say it powerfully and loudly to show the vigor of the Chinese students. So , let’s become volunteers to make the World Expo successful.

Answer 2

1.The shape of HAIBAO like “人” in Chinese.
The shape of HAIBAO is like the writing“人” in Chinese.
2.His has curly hair like wave.
He has curly hair like the wave.
3.His eyes is very big, the big eyes contains the hope of the city ,
His eyes are very big, they stand for the hope of the city.
4.He is always smile , always say “Hi” to the people all over the world to invite them come to China.
He alwaye smiles,it seems like to say “Hi” to welcome the people all over the world.
5.There are lots of building in the World Expo,they are so beautiful an colorful
There are lots of new buildings in the World Expo,they are so beautiful and colorful.
6.I like the Happy Street of the Holland best.
I like the Happy Street which for the Holland exhibition best.
7.We could become a volunteer .
We could be a volunteer .
8. we should say it powerful and loudly to show the vigor of the Chinese student.
we should say it powerfully and loudly to show the vigor of the Chinese students.