Question

英语改错，急！

I will share you a true story happening to me a couple___
of days ago.One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks___
from the food stand.A few roommates were then invited to___
enjoy the food.Unfortunately,all of them got poisonous and___
had stomachaches with our faces pale.They were quickly___
sent to a nearby hospital.Doctors examined them and gave___
them some medicine.They accident should make us to realize___
the serious of the food safety problem.I strongly suggest that___
the whole society pays much more attention to the food safety.___

Answer 1

第一行：happening 改为 happened。由下文 a couple of days ago 判断出为过去时。
第二行：classmate 改为 classmates 。one of 后接复数名词。
第三行：正确。
第四行：poisonous 改为 poisoned。 get poisoned 中毒。
第五行：our 改为 their 。从下文 they were quickly..判断应该是他们不是我们。
第六行：正确。
第七行：They 改为 The。
第八行：正确。
第九行：pays 改为 pay。 society是集体名词，在这个句子中表示整个社会的所有成员，用法近似于 class。所以这里不能用动词第三人称单数形式。

Answer 2

happned ;classmates ;few改成lot of; 没错；our改成their；nearby移到hospital后；medicines;they改成the；q去掉of后的the;去掉much

Answer 3

When
Mom
is
around,I
cannot
watch
TV
with
my
full
attention,because
she
likes
talking.If
she
cannot
come
up
with
anything
important
to
say.she
'll
probably
read
parts
of
the
article.She
will
read
a
sentence
or
two,which
is
on
TV.Sometimes
I
think
maybe
she
is
just
not
interestied
in
the
TV
programs..But
I
also
wonder
whether
she
means
to
stop
me
watching
too
much
TV.Maybe
she
wants
me
to
spend
more
time
talking
with
her.I've
decided
to
take
the
case
seriously
and
communicate.

Answer 4

He
is
interested
in
so
many
things.
The
next
day
is
the
such
thing
happened.
-Happy
new
year!-So
for
you.
-as
is
our
plan.How
do
you
like
it?
The
two
girls
look
like
other
because
they
are
twins.
The
children
are
as
the
same
age.
-May
I
speak
to
Betty?-This
is
Bettey
speaking.
-I
like
classical
music.-I
do.
-May
I
call
you
Mr.Smith?-Sorry,you
can't.Our
American
puts
family
names
first.
The
flower
is
pretty
and
it'sfragrance
are
sweet.
Alice
is
not
quite
himself
today.Send
she
for
a
doctor.