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英语翻译问题～恳请高手指点！！

2008年3月至2009年9月在XX报关有限公司从事报关工作，主要负责申报货物，货物的通关业务，处理客户通关的相关问题。
我有较强的责任感及团队意识。在以往的工作中积累了一定的操作经验，性格开朗,亲和力强,能与同事融洽相处,工作认真、负责、能吃苦。在今后的工作中，希望能接受新的挑战了解更多的知识。能熟练操作电脑,熟练操作各种办公自动化设备（打印机、复印机、传真机等）；善于沟通，思维敏捷，勇于担任各项工作任务。
我爱好运动、旅游和音乐。
I am in March 2008 to 2009, nine months for the XXX declaration in the declaration process, Ltd.I am in the company responsible for declaration of goods、 cargo clearance services and handling customer issues related to customs clearance.
I have a strong sense of responsibility and team spirit.I work in the previous experience accumulated.
My personality is bright and can get along with colleagues.Routine work serious、responsible and hardworking.I wanted to take on new challenges to learn more knowledge in the future work.Computer, various office automation equipment (printers, copiers, fax machines, etc.) will operate.Good communication、 quick thinking and brave as the various tasks at work.
Sports, travel and music is my hobby.
我自己的翻译能否有高人修改

Answer 1

I had worked in XX Customs Ltd. since Mar. of 2008 to Sept. of 2009, being resposible for declaring goods, clearances of goods and the related business. I have accumulated some experience in operations from the previous work.

I like sports, travel and music etc. My personality is bright and I'm easy to get along with colleagues.I have a strong sense of responsibility and team spirit, I'm always conscientious and diligent in work. I can use computer or office automation equipements deftly.

I'm quick thinking and good at communication,be bold to assume all kinds of work. I wish to take new challenges and learn more knowledge from the coming work.

逻辑比较乱，所以我改了顺序帮你翻译。祝你成功：）

Answer 2

March 2008 to September 2009 declaration in the XX Co., Ltd. in the declaration process, is mainly responsible for declaration of goods, cargo clearance services, handling customer issues related to customs clearance.
I have a strong sense of responsibility and sense of team. In the past, have accumulated some experience in operation, and good humor, affinity, and can get along with colleagues, work conscientiously, responsible, hardworking. In future work, wanted to take on new challenges to learn more knowledge. Proficiency in computer operation, proficiency in a variety of office automation equipment (printers, copiers, fax machines, etc.); good communication, quick thinking, courage as the various tasks.
I love sports, travel and music.

Answer 3

March 2008 to September 2009 declaration in the XX Co., Ltd. in the declaration process, is mainly responsible for declaration of goods, cargo clearance services, handling customer issues related to customs clearance.

I have a strong sense of responsibility and sense of team. In the past, have accumulated some experience in operation, and good humor, affinity, and can get along with colleagues, work conscientiously, responsible, hardworking. In future work, wanted to take on new challenges to learn more knowledge. Good command of computer proficiency in various office automation equipment (printers, copiers, fax machines, etc.); good communication, quick thinking, brave as the various tasks.

I love sports, travel and music.
你自己的翻译也可以反正不理本来的意思 可以的