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the party went on very good amd we all had a good@time .nearky all the people came who were inviting.jane @could not come because she had been to beijing .tom @was also away in country with his parents .mary 's @friend brought their instruments amd played beautiful @music so that everyone could dance .franco drink too @much more and fell over when he was dancing with @Ann that made everyone laugh.Tom told us he'd @go to abroad soon .Ann Steve met Jack amd spent all @the evening talking to them .all of us enjoy ourselves ,@代表一个错误，共十个！快！

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the party went on very well amd we all had a good@time .nearky all the people came who were invited.jane @could not come because she had gone to beijing .tom @was also away in the country with his parents .mary 's @friends brought their instruments amd played beautiful @music so that everyone could dance .franco drunk too @much and fell over when he was dancing with @Ann which made everyone laugh.Tom told us he'd @go abroad soon .Ann Steve met Jack amd spent all @the evening talking to them .all of us enjoyed ourselves