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Thefriendshipnotonlydoesheorshegetsonwellwithyou,butalsoheorshecanhelpyouwhenyougetin...
The friendship not only does he or she gets on well with you,but also he or she can help you when you get into the trouble.So how can we choice friends who are in favor of you and become you the most closed people through your all life?
While we also must to learn how to treat you friend.So what we should do for our best friends?
First of all we should help them when they are in trouble which they also should do.
The second,we should always get in touch of them and often care for them.
The last,when we argue with something like ideas.We should think twice.And we must belive each other.
In a word.The friendship means help,happy and belive. 展开
While we also must to learn how to treat you friend.So what we should do for our best friends?
First of all we should help them when they are in trouble which they also should do.
The second,we should always get in touch of them and often care for them.
The last,when we argue with something like ideas.We should think twice.And we must belive each other.
In a word.The friendship means help,happy and belive. 展开
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With friendship,not only he or she gets on well with you, but also he or she can help you when you get into trouble.So how can we choose friends who are in favor of you and your most close people through all your life?
Well we also must learn how to treat our friends.So what do we should do to our best friends?
First of all,we should help them when they are in trouble when they need it.Secondly,we should always keep in touch with them and often take care of them.And finally,when we argue with each other like on different ideas.We should think it twice.And we must believe each other.
In a word(all in all).Friendship means help,happiness and belief.
With friendship,not only he or she gets on well with you, but also he or she can help you when you get into trouble.So how can we choose friends who are in favor of you and your most close people through all your life?
Well we also must learn how to treat our friends.So what do we should do to our best friends?
First of all,we should help them when they are in trouble when they need it.Secondly,we should always keep in touch with them and often take care of them.And finally,when we argue with each other like on different ideas.We should think it twice.And we must believe each other.
In a word(all in all).Friendship means help,happiness and belief.
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