Question

写一篇200字左右的英语作文，谈谈对上海的看法

不用讲得太深入，浅显的讲一下，但是要体现出对上海的喜爱之情。

Answer 1

The recent exposure of some rude behaviors and misconducts of some Shanghai citizens gave rise to people’s concern over the issue on how to better the image of Shanghai, a world-renowned metropolis. As far as I am concerned, Shanghai citizens should have the qualities of observing the rules in public, tolerance and understanding to live up to a modern Shanghai citizen.

To start with, observing the rules in pubic is the best embodiment of civilization in any society. Shanghai municipal government urges its citizens to keep to Seven Don’ts. These measures, if taken effectively, can not only contribute to our better environment but also bring improvement to social
disorder.

Further more, being tolerant is called for to be educated people. While waiting for the bus or in the cinema and etc, people are frequently bothered by either long queues or crowds. If one is tolerant enough, hecan contain himself, thus reducing chaos to the minimum.

Last but not least, trying tounderstand people around you is the pre-condition of a loving and caring community. Be empathetic while others are in trouble, by offering a helping hand.
Keeping the above three points in mind will surely help make Shanghai a better place to live.

Answer 2

Shanghai is an international city ,which has attracted so many foreigners from all over the world. There are many beautiful places such as the oriental pearl TV tower, Huangpu River and so on. Of these places of interest, the oriental pearl TV tower is so attractive that none has left Shanghai without visiting it . It is so tall that all the visitors have to go upstairs by elevators. The view from the top of the tower is very grand especially at night . Besides this ,enjoying the beautiful view on a ship by the Huangpu River is very exciting . The beautiful lights from the tall buildings along the river make the river a so beautiful place. During the river tour we can also see the outer part of the oriental pearl TV tower. Also there is much delicous food, such as Nanxiang small steamed bun ,pan-fried steamed bun and so on. Thedelicious food make many visitors mouth water . All in all ,Shanghai is a place worth visiting many times.

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能否再加上一点表达情感的句子？

追答

亲！我才十几岁好不容易在挖出来的！

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但是...我要的是抒情的句子...而不是描写景色的句子啊....