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高一英语改错题 有三个地方不明白 求大神解答 谢谢O(∩_∩)O！

改错原文：
①Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. ②Before I left, I was given a lot of present. ③Among the presents, there were two presents which were really interested me. ④My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them. ⑤My brother gave me a note, which read, "My present has put in you bedroom." ⑥When I hurriedly into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. ⑦I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

1 第②句里，Before引导的时间状语从句和后面的主句不是有先后顺序的么，为什么不用考虑过去完成时？
2 第④句里，color pictures是可以表示彩色图片而不需要用colorful么？
3 第⑥句里，in that这里，答案说是把that换成which，这个我懂。但是我想把in that当做地点状语提前，而把指代that改成this，这种改法可以么？

求英语大神解答，说一下原因，谢谢啦！

Answer 1

I went to abroad ，to去掉

a lot of presents

which were really interested me,were去掉

bought me a book

has been put in your bedroom

in which there was

a little surprised

1. 前后顺序只适用于after/since,before这里不太符合，也没有必要，意思已经很完整

2. color名词可以活用成形容词性修饰BOOK，就好像名词family也可以说成family picture全家福照片

3. 都不可以，因为已经有there了。

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我有答案，一共10处错误，不过还是谢谢你哈！
1 before不适用于动作先后么？这个先后什么时候才能用，总是判断不好。
3 但是答案给的是In which啊，那there was an electronic dictionary in this. 这句话不对么？

这么晚了，感谢啊！

追答

before也可以用的，看具体有没有意思、逻辑就好了，完成时的逻辑在于该动作要对现在或说话当时有影响，像你文中这句，没有强调影响，而是作为时间状语的普通陈述，看他作用偏向哪个。
there was an electronic dictionary in this. 这句话对,用THIS最好是THIS BOX

Answer 2

1.2句中没有两个事件。只是陈述过去的情形。
2.colorful指色彩缤纷的。color指彩色的，colorTV。
3.介词+which状语从句，因为in 不能和this搭配。in+which是一组固定搭配。

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这么晚了，谢谢啊，辛苦了！

1 这个先后什么时候才能用，总是判断不好。

3 in和this不能连用？这个...没听说过啊。。。那“在这里”该如何表达呢？There was an electronic dictionary in this. 这句话不对么？

追答

跟你讲一些in的搭配：in that 有因为 由于 既然 的意思，in this就只是“在这里面”的意思，in which是介词加关系代词。

Answer 3

1.英语中可以用一般过去时代替过去完成时。这里就表示过去的时间，没必要用过去完成时。before的用法不是固定的，需要看具体语境。
2.colourful是色彩鲜艳的意思，这里就是固定的，彩色图片应该就是这么说（= =我也不太保准。。。我是高二的。。。）
3.如果你要是把that 改成 this，就变成逗号连两个句子了，就不对了。