Question

my most -----experience 写一篇英语作文

Doing Sth.—My Most RewardingExperience (理由陈述) （60-100 words）
写作模式
Topic Sentence 1) As one of mymost rewarding experiences, doing something has brought a lot ofbenefits to my life.
Detail 1 2) For onething … (理由I) 3) Unlike…, itoffers me much freedom to…
Detail 2 4) Foranother… (理由II) 5)Through…, Ihave more chances to…
Detail 3 6) And themost amazing result of doing so is that… (理由III) 7)Now I tend to …
Conclusion 8) In sum, thereis not anything in … (my life) that is more beneficial than doingsth.

Answer 1

今天FIONA带我们去了她朋友家的农场，农场非常大，感觉上有点像宽阔的蒙古草原。
Today FIONA took us to her friend's farm, farm is so big, a bit like the broad grasslands of Mongolia feel.
农场主教我们怎样挤牛奶，我知道了挤牛奶的时候是，手指不能上下移动，手向上的时候，手指应捏住奶头，这样奶才会出来。我照着农场主的示范做了，白花花的牛奶从奶头中喷射出来，溅得我满脸。
Farm bishop we how to milk a cow, I know the milking time, fingers can not move up and down, hands up, fingers pinch the nipple, so that milk will come out. I follow the farmers do the demonstration, shining white milk is ejected from the nipple, I face a splash.
随后同行的REX也开始学着挤，谁知好玩的事情发生了，他刚一伸手，奶牛竟开始撒尿了，搞得大家笑作一团，可以用人仰马翻来形容我们当时的情景。
Then the counterparts of REX also began to learn to squeeze, who knows the funny thing happened, he just put out a hand, the cow began to urinate, make you laugh, can be used to describe the scene at that time we utterly routed.
在农场里我用奶瓶喂小奶牛BB，它把奶瓶扯来扯去，特别调皮。
On the farm I bottle fed small cow BB, it put the bottle to pull, very naughty.
农场里所有的家禽都有，牛、羊、鸡、鸭、猪。。。。。。，我还抱了小兔子，在我怀里软软的一团，毛发很光滑。
All the farm poultry, cattle, sheep, chicken, duck, pig...... Also, I hold the little rabbit, in my arms a blob, hair very smooth.
今天参观农场，让我领略了澳大利亚的原生态美景
Today to visit the farm, I appreciate the natural beauty of Australia

Answer 2

My most rewarding experience
In the memory of my mine,a competition of prelection is the most rewarding experience in my life.
Self-confidence is by on means the important character for everyone.But I lost them before the competition.
In china,the only level estimating students is marks.Holding a low marks in math and physics I receives no warm welcome from teachers and classmates.However,literature is my favorate courses I spent too much time to literature to have enough time to study any other course.So I haven`t earn respect from people around.I cost further time to literature in liberaries.
After endless waitness,chance coming .last year my university hold a competition of prelection. And I attended. After preliminary ,quality-final and final contest.I win the campion cup.All of my classmates come around with me. And self-confidence come back to my body.
A proverb says," a tree has been recognized by its fruit."I think is correct,especially in China.