Question

英语短文改错，麻烦在原句上修改下让我知道错哪里了，并解释一下原因，谢谢了

1.你的英语老师教得很好，你想成为像她那样的人。
2.如果你成为英语老师，你会尽力去教好学生，帮助学生提高英语成绩。
3.你会对学生很友好，课后与他们一起玩耍。
4.你现在要努力学习，争取将来成为一名好老师。

1.My English teacher is very good that she teache us，I want to ba a person as her
2.I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher
3.I can be good friendly students，play with them after class
4.I should hard study now，because of I want to become a good teacher

Answer 1

1.My English teacher teaches us very well.I want to be someone like her.
2.If I am an English teacher,I will try to teach my students well and help them improve their English.
3.I will be friendly to the students.I will play with them after class.
4.I am working hard now in order to be a good teacher in the future.
至于你的原文错在哪里，请自己对比理解吧。

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能详细解释一下错哪了吗

Answer 2

1. My English teacher teaches English very well 英语教得好

2. I will try my best to teach and help them to improve ..............

3. I will be very friendly to students

4. I should study hard from now on for becoming a good teacher.
   

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能详细的解释一下吗

Answer 3

1.你的英语老师教得很好，你想成为像她那样的人。
2.如果你成为英语老师，你会尽力去教好学生，帮助学生提高英语成绩。
3.你会对学生很友好，课后与他们一起玩耍。
4.你现在要努力学习，争取将来成为一名好老师。

1.My English teacher teaches well，I want to ba a person like her
2.I will try my best to teach students and help them improve English score if I become an English teacher
3.I will be friendly students，play with them after class
4.I should study hardnow，because I want to become a good teacher

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能详细解释一下错哪里了吗

Answer 4

1. My English teacher is very good that she teache us，I want to ba a person as her
正确说法：My English teacher teaches very well. I want to be a person just like her.
前半的重点是“教得很好”，你那句是“她的人很好”
后半句as的用法不对。

2. I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher.
正确说法：If I become an English teacher, I will do my best to teach and help my students in improving their English learning.
"an English"，不是 a English. “try to myself best”是明显语法错误。让学生学得好不等同分数高。

3. I can be good friendly students，play with them after class.
正确说法：I will treat my students as my friends and join them after class.
原句明显语法错误，“课后与学生一起玩耍”，是假设学生在课余必定去玩耍，意思不合情理。

4. I should hard study now，because of I want to become a good teacher
正确说法：I should study hard now, because I want to become a good teacher.
形容词应在动词之后，because 之后不用 of

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为什么because 之后不用 of

“try to myself best”是明显语法错误。
后半句as的用法不对。

哪里不对呢

追答

because of 之后该是 something，而不是 I

to 之后该是什么，请你去翻翻语法书

like 和 as 用法的分别，一般语法书都有

不必在此详述！