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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，修改或删除。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。3.不按要求作答者，不予计分！Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum(流浪汉)in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

Answer 1

小题1:去掉so 小题2:her—him 小题3:say—said 小题4:in后面加the 小题5:passing—passed 小题6:he后面加was 小题7:immediate—immediately 小题8:or—and 小题9:mile—miles 小题10:in--with

试题分析：短文讲了一个小故事，有一个浪漫汉躲在了公交车的厕所里想逃票，这个时候一个乘客看到了，就一个挨一个的给司机传话，但流浪汉（bum）和炸弹（bomb）的发音相似，传到司机的地方就变成了炸弹，司机召来了警察，排查了两个多小时也没找到炸弹还形成了交通堵塞。 小题1:因为他不想付钱，所以躲在厕所里面，前面有because引导的原因状语从句，后面是主句，去掉so 小题2:代词的用法。文章的开始说的是a man一位男士。her—him 小题3:时态的用法。文章第一句是once曾经，由此可知是过去的事情。say—said 小题4:这里是指公交车上的厕所，所以应为特指。in后面加the 小题5:这里是指消息被传递，故应用动词的被动语态，被传递的意思。passing—passed 小题6:公共汽车司机被告知车上有个炸弹。表示被动含义：he后面加was 小题7:词性的用法。本句中是用来修饰动词stop的，修饰动词应用副词。immediate—immediately 小题8:连词的用法。告诉乘客下车并且要离车远一点儿，是顺承关系，应用and.or—and 小题9:名词单复数的用法。 15 miles应用复数形式，mile—miles 小题10:固定短语的考查。 在某人的帮助下，短语为with the help of="with" one’s help.in--with