Question

求帮忙看语法错误并改正谢谢！

求帮忙看语法错误并改正谢谢！如图所示指出语法错误越多越好谢谢啦

Answer 1

1. 第二段：If I could go back and change one day in my life ,I would  choose not to buy that melon.(这是与将来事实相反的虚拟语气)

The reason is that my parents and I were poisoned by the melon. The most important thing is that my mother has been pregnant with my brother .（根据你的文章知道妈妈怀孕是从你买西瓜到现在都在发生的事，故要使用现在完成时的）

2.On one  day 要删掉介词On.     at the fruit shop 改为in a fruit shop (在本文中第一次出现的事物)

3.最后一段第一句改为;  what you can see .......is that the food safety problem is serious  in our country now .

    希望对你有帮助。