Question

英语自我介绍！（跪求大家帮忙）

我叫葛军！今年24岁！我家里有三口人！我的爸爸和妈妈！爸爸是一名工人工作非常努力！妈妈已经退休!我个人爱好广泛！喜欢足球！上网！看书！我在工作中是一名细心勤奋的人！希望我的工作可以让大家满意！谢谢！

Answer 1

My name is GeJun, I am 24 years old. There are three person in my family, my parents and I. My father is a worker and he is always working hard. my mother has retired. I have lots of hobbies,such as soccer, reading, surfing on the net,and so on. I always work hard and finish my work carefully. I hope you all will be satisfied with me.Thank you.

看得出来这片自我介绍对你很重要，答案用我的吧，楼上的有些语法错误，我修正了，分给他吧。

Answer 2

my name is gejun, i am 24 years old. there are three people in my family, my parents and I. my father is worker who's working hard. my mother has retired. i have lots of hobbies, soccer, surfing on net, reading. i am hard-working and careful person on working. i hope you all will satisfy with my work. thank you