Question

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My father，who worked on a farm ten years before ,is now a excellent lawyer in our city .While working on the farm ,he spent most of his spare time reading book on law and finally he became a lawyer .By working hardly ,his dream of being a lawyer has been come true .When I was still a boy ,my father told me that he will do anything he could help me if necessary .I believed him .He often said to me ,“There is nothing in the world that you cannot do unless you put all your heart into it .”Encourage by his words ,l 've made up my mind not to do my best .

Answer 1

1.before 改为 ago ，a改为an
2。while改为when
3。book改为books
4。hardly改为hard
5。been去掉
6。will改为would，help前面加to
7。unless改为if
8。encourage改为encouraged
9。not去掉

Answer 2

is now a excellent lawyer , excellent元音前用an

reading book 改成: reading books

By working hardly , hardly副词，几乎不， by working hard或者： because of working hard

my father told me that he will do anything he could help me if necessary 这是个复合句，主句 told， 从句也用过去， 改成： my fater told me that he would do anything he could to help me if it was necessary.

Encourage by his words ,l 've made up my mind not to do my best .
encourage动词，用被动，encouraged, made up my mind 后的not去掉
改成： Encouraged by his words, I've made up my mind to do my best.

Answer 3

before-ago
a-an
book-books
hardly-hard
been 去掉
will-would
could 后加 to
said-says
unless-if
Encourage-Encouraged
not 去掉

Answer 4

都是高手

我老爸在我们城里现在是有名的律师，不认识的人谁能想到十年前他只是个种田汉，只靠农闲时候看法律书和自己的努力学习，他就拿到了律师资格证捧起律师这个金饭碗。
我很小的时候，他就说“能帮的我都会帮，但人要成功主要靠自己，只要你努力做没什么事是做不成的。”这句话是我人生的座右铭

Answer 5

My father, who worked in a farm ten years ago, is now an excellent lawyer in our city. While working in the farm, he spent most of his spare time reading book about laws and finally became a lawyer. Because he worked so hard toward his dream of being a lawyer, he succeeded.

When I was little, my father told me that he would do anything he could to help me, if necessary, and I trusted him. He often told me that "You can do nothing only if you put your entire heart into it." His words encouraged me and now I've made up my mind to do my best. (你为什么会说 i've made up my mind NOT to do my best? 你是想说你爸爸让你觉得你不应该做到最好吗? 还是因为你只是写错了..)