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Your tenses are correct but it is too boring. It will be better: Today
I visited Apple Street first. The street was long so I was really tired. Then I visited Orange Street. I find that the surface of the street was uneven.
Here's what I'd do: The first thing I did today was to visit Apple Street. When I got there
I found out that the street was longer than what I expected! After a long and tiring walk
I found myself at Orange Street. The surface of the street was uneven
so I had to watch my step.
参考: Myself
TENSE isn't everything! There are many other ects when it es to learning Englsih. It is correct to use Simple Past tense to describe events in the past. 发觉条路长 I thought (that) the road was long. 我发现左条街路面不平 I found (that) the road was bumpy. Here is the recap of my journey today: ----------------------------------------------------- I first went to Apple Street. I thought it was really long. Then I went to Orange Street. As I walked along the road
I found it very bumpy.
present perfect continuous:- Today I have been visiting Apple St.for too long
longing for an Apple Computer. Then I have been visiting Orange St. for uneven pavements extending up to present unperfect condition too long for my having a longing for an Orange Computer.
Your sentences was very bored and not vivid . So
I let it very vivid and longer than the other one . Today
I visited Apple Street first . I think the street was the longest road that I have seen already.I felt bored and very tired so I visited Orange road . I discover the street of the pavement was uneven.
参考: Me