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非常之急！！初二，一篇英语作文，70词，作文要求在图片里！好的回答必采纳，再追加80分给你！很急

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Now,many students take after-school classes. Shall we take after-school
classes? Is it good for us? My classmates think that it is a waste of time and
money. We should take more time to read, do sports and take social activities and
become more creative.
I don't think taking after-school classes is
good for us. If you take after-school classes, you may be careless to have
lessons in school and it will run out of your free time, then you can't be more
creative.
In my spare time,I often do what I want to do. I often go
hiking with my parents and piay with them.I'm very relaxed when I walk with my
parents.
When I was eleven years old, my mom let me take a
after-school class. Every student was talking, eating, drinking and playing.That
teacher was having a long telephone competition. I had a disappointing ciass and
then I have never been taking after-school classes.

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I don't think taking after-school classes is
good for us. If we take after-school classes, we will have no time to relax. Happiness is more important for children.
In my spare time,I often do what I want to do. I often go
hiking with my parents and play with them. I'm very relaxed when I walk with my
parents.