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题目是：女人是否应该在军界和警界起到和男人一样的作用
原文：Some people think that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police forces and military forces. Others believe that women are not suitable for this kind of work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Answer 1

你好，我是世纪雅思学生，我问我们老师，一下是我的老师给回答的：
In present-day society, plastic containers and utensils are extensively used in big cities and the countryside alike. They are so common-place and I would hazard the guess that each one of us has seen, at one time or another, the unsightly scene of plastic bags swirling in the wind. These plastic shopping bags, chopsticks, to-go boxes and mineral-water bottles, to name but a few, when not properly disposed of, create a colossal amount of non-biodegradable refuse. Therefore, some people argue that we have embarked upon a “throw-away” era when plastic rubbish is largely dumped indiscriminately and irresponsibly (this act is often labeled “white pollution” on account of the color of plastic wastes). Personally, I wholeheartedly support their view.
There are numerous reasons for this worrisome phenomenon coming into being. To begin with, at present the bulk of people who shop and/or eat out regularly are still poorly-informed, uninformed or misinformed about the pernicious influence that non-biodegradable pollutants exert on the ecosystem, which is the main culprit in the global-scale mishandling of the plastic wastes. The chief component of such trash is polythene, which cannot decompose on landfill sites over the process of the next hundreds of years if no major scientific breakthrough comes along in polythene treatment. Thus, such trash must be dealt with collectively rather than be scattered like tumbleweeds. Secondly, the proliferation of plastic shopping bags and eating ware is largely fuelled by the surging, headlong consumerism. Plastic containers and utensils are lighter in weight, cheaper (often free of charge) in price and water-proof in performance. These superior properties make them preferable to their paper and cloth counterparts in customers’ eyes; and as consumer satisfaction reigns supreme in contemporary society, compared with superb portability, affordability and utility, how to dispose of them is the last thing the customers are concerned about. Additionally, plastic bags, wrap and containers are also commercially feasible since they are cheaper to manufacture, ship and store. These mercenary considerations also have prompted the good old cloth or paper bags to be supplanted by plastic bags but over the phasing-out process, few stores and restaurants advocate or encourage the use of environmentally-benign disposal of plastic trash, hence the whole slew of non-biodegradable garbage and environmental hazards ensue.
Given the scale and severity of “white pollution”, we must take immediate steps to address this scourge. In the first place, we must do our utmost to enhance people’s awareness of how persistent and devastating non-biodegradable trash can be to our environment and our posterity’s. Secondly, retail stores and dining establishments should spare no effort in encouraging their customers to reuse plastic packing items. Furthermore, indiscriminate and irresponsible dumping of household garbage or personal junk should be outlawed by the legislature and heavy fines or even jail terms must be imposed on those compulsive litterbugs who fail to get their act together. Then, on the part of the biochemical researchers and technologists, scientific research must be launched here and now in pursuit of effectual ways to convert non-biodegradable refuse to biodegradable refuse. Last but not least, the government must not shirk its obligations in mobilizing scientific resources and rallying popular support in the crusade against “white pollution”. Neither should pay just lip service to relevant research and campaigns if no enough funding can be obtained otherwise. Additionally, I am convinced a customer tax levied by the government on the use of plastic bags will also help to curb this massive “white pollution”.
The havoc non-biodegradable refuse can wreak on the ecosystem is beyond our imagination. It can eventually devastate soil, water and the aquatic and terrestrial biota. We must start combating this environmental catastrophe before the ecosystem irretrievably breaks down under the reign of the minute plastic debris.

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Answer 2

First of all, women indeed played a significant role in the country's police forces and this tendency does not cease, whereas it has the remarkable effects on the psychological aspects, which are irreplaceable, such as the recovery from the terrorist attacks and the daily office's affairs. The female criminals also demand the assistance of female police forces. The military forces require women to play a role in medical treatment and other technical staffs. In US navy, such as the aircraft carriers, women can be more prudent, careful and patient in detect the unpredictable affairs, such as the submarines.
However, as the lack of strong capabilities, the female can rarely do cumbersome tasks. In some emergent situations, only men can handle the crisis rapidly.
In my opinion, female can play a critical role in some fields, and it will enhance the abilities of the military and police forces in a more moderate ways to deal with the dangerous cases. It is like a spring in the ruthless desert for people to seek hope in the endless despirations.

Answer 3

还魂后的老方丈仍为申公子身份，但性情大变，积德行善，常闭目诵经，最终离家出走，返回长清寺，托起瓦钵，再做主持。

Answer 4

因为旅游所能接触到的人和事是相当有限的， 他们并不具有对本国整体的代表性，而很多人觉得眼见为实，嗯，就是格外的相信自己看到的，从而愈发强化了这一偏见。可以举例子解释，比如说来北京上海的游客觉得中国非常的现代化，富裕； 但是实际上很多地方十分落后，他们没有看到，只相信自己的所见，就形成了偏见； 其次，由于对于外国风俗习惯的不理解，会产生误解，比如外国人不吃狗肉，那么来到广西看到狗肉节，会觉得中国人简直是太残忍了，但是实际在中国人看来吃狗就和吃所有的牲畜一样，没什么问题。 是不是足够详细了？ 自己查查翻译成英文吧，偶是雅思大作文老师。这是六月预测题吧~这么辛苦 给分吧吧吧~~~ 哦 还有solution, 那就根据原因来啦~~比如说，当地政府加强对于国际游客的宣传，比如说印 brochure 给他们介绍风俗习惯...; 然后游客自己要注意啦 去之前要充分的了解目的国， 然后多多的思考 摒弃偏见..

Answer 5

每三个月换一次题库，年初刚换题库，口语什么的比较吃亏，毕竟后面两个月新东方什么的就都把新的题库总结出来了，能准备的比较充分。每年12月是最简单的倒是真的。作文最好还是听讲座，不愿意花钱可以在往上搜相关的视频，雅思口语有自己的一套