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A kind man Last Friday, it was raining. Tom had to go to work by bike because his tasks did not finish. But the road was too wet. He fell down from his bike. Then he could not stand. At that time, the rain was raining heavily. He shouted:”Help, Help”A police came here and help him call a hospital car, and took him to hospital. A doctor looked after Tom. And told them he was not serious, but he had to have a rest for several days. When the doctor treated Tom, the police left there. A few days later, Tom was well and found out the police with his family. Said to him Thank you. From this story, we should help each other. |
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