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Hi,everybody,mynameisLucy,myEnglishnameisLouise,myGermannameis.HildeMybirthdayisOctob... Hi, everybody, myname is Lucy, my English nameis Louise, my German nameis. Hilde
My birthdayis October 20th, myfavorite subject is English, I like football, I thinkit's great. I like Germany andBayern Munich. Today I want to introduceis my favorite football star 。

嗨,各位,我的名字是露西,我的英语名字是露易丝,我的德语名字是希尔德

我的生日是10月20日,我喜欢的科目是英语,我还喜欢足球,我认为它很棒。我喜欢德国队还有拜仁慕尼黑。今天我要介绍的是我喜欢的足球明星和我欣赏的足球明星

This is Philip Lahm, he is I most like thestar, I love his dedication, skill, and noble quality. He and Loew led theGerman team won the Brazil World Cup champion

这是菲利拉姆,他是我最喜欢的明星,我爱他的奉献,技能,和高贵的品质。他和勒夫德国队带领夺得巴西世界杯冠军

I also like astar, Leo Messi. I like hishumility, his skills and wayof living. Inthe world cup, althoughhe is the German team of rivals, but I still likehim.

我还喜欢一位球星,里奥·梅西。我喜欢他的谦逊,他的球技和为人处世的方法。在世界杯上他虽然是德国队的对手,但我仍旧很喜欢他。

As a German fans, I think, no matter who the opponent, you should learn to appreciate and abide by the moral.
To this end, thank you

作为一个德国球迷,我认为,不论对手是谁,要学会欣赏而遵守道德。
到此结束,谢谢
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1.第一句 我的名字是Lucy,这已经是英文名字了,后面还要再说一个“我的英文名字”干什么。后面怎么还有德语名字,德文你会念吗?
2.还有一句:My birthday is (on) October.你少些了介词on。
3.德国队是the German team。
4.my favorite football stars ,star你没有加s,你后面讲了不止一个你喜欢的明星。
5.开始介绍明星应该为The first star is Philip Lahm . 不应该说成This is Philip Lahm
6. he is I most like thestar 改为 He is my most like star.
7.你那个“奉献”应该用contribution,高贵的也应该改为high 就行。你翻译的词一看就是用翻译器弄的。
8. He and Loew led theGerman team won the Brazil World Cup champion.改为He and Loew led the German team to win the Brazil World Cup champion.
9.I also like astar, Leo Messi. 改为I also like a star named Leo Messi.
10.谦逊应该是modesty。
11. althoughhe is the German team of rivals, but I still likehim. 这句改为 although he is a rival of the German team , I still like him.(but 和although在句子只能有一个)
12.As a German fans改为As a German fan(去掉s)
13. I think, no matter who the opponent改为 I think no matter who is the opponent
14. appreciate and abide by the moral.改为 appreciate and comply with morality.
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My birthdayis October 20th--------------------------My birthdayis October is on 20th
he is I most like thestar--------------------------------------he is the star i like the most
应该就这么两句了!!!!!!
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My birthday is on 20th of october.
Today, i would like to introduce my favourite football star.
He is the star I like the most.
As a German fans, I would like to say that, no matter who was the competitor, we should learn to appreciate and be ethical.
To this end 《《《 可以不加。 最后说 Thank You 就可以了
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