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这篇作文好吗？

Answer 1

　　非常棒

　　首先是结构，除非自己能轻易把握文章的进度和结构，建议文章按照总分总山掘的方式，在开头就文章的标题作出简单的概述并引出下文，这就是开头。
　　中间的整体部分在写的时候记得罩大要是不是点名文章的主旨，最好的办法就是适当出现关于文章主旨或者标题的关键词，因为阅卷老师的逗闷核阅读速度的原因，这是能够得分的一方面，当然不能胡乱的加，度需要自己把握，文章的流畅性还是需要的。
　　最后末尾切记点名文章主旨，对中间的内容作最后总结，只要文章内容是抓住主题的，总结内容也就是在总结全文。
　　总分总的结构容易让人一眼看明白，印象分就上去了，文章按照这样的结构就会变得流畅，读起来会让人觉得舒服。

Answer 2

As we all know, healthy is very important to everybody.But do you really know how to stay healthy? Here are some useful tips. First, we should do exercise if we have time.For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper.Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. Second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. We should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.

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