Question

英语短文改错，急！！

you can find all kinds information in just a few minute on internet . it `s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books .recently even though , many people have been discussing the dangers of the internet . they have been reports in america about people trying to steal person information for bad purposes . finding information on the net is easily . but not all information are good to society . for example , you can find such information like how to kill people . the problem will become more serious in the future . 有九处错误，谢谢，大小写不算，主要是赶时间！！

Answer 1

you can find all kinds (+of) information in just a few minute (改minutes) on internet . it `s like going to a huge library without have (改having) to walk around to find your books .recently even though (even though 改however), many people have been discussing the dangers of the internet . they (改there) have been reports in america about people trying to steal person (改personal) information for bad purposes . finding information on the net is easily (改easy). but not all information are (改is) good to society . for example , you can find such information like (改as) how to kill people . the problem will become more serious in the future .

Answer 2

1.kinds 后面加of
2.minute改为minutes
3.internet 前加the
4.第二行的have改为having
5.第三行的 reports改为 reported
6.第四行的person改为personal
不好意思只能该处这么多了。

Answer 3

第一行changes不能被动，第七行instead.of.dong.sth，第九行后面原形，倒数第三行单词拼错easier，倒数第四行that换成it，倒数第五行单词拼错computer就找到这么多了，楼主么手机打的辛苦海的了

Answer 4

minute-->minutes

Answer 5

you can find all kinds (+of)information in just a few minute(minutes) on internet . it `s like going to a huge library without have (having)to walk around to find your books .recently even though(however) , many people have been discussing the dangers of the internet . they have been reports(reported) in america about people trying to steal person (personal)information for bad purposes . finding information on the net is easily (easy). but not all information are(is) good to society . for example , you can find such information like(as) how to kill people . the problem will become more serious in the future

kinds +of
minutes
have ---having
even though ---however
report ----reported
person----personal
easily ---easy
are --is
like --as