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N: There is a Lady’s Night tonight with free drinks. Shall we go together? R: Don’t covet *** all advantages. Shouldn’t you be thinking about making big bucks? J: Relax. She is just suggesting we should let loose a bit. V: At my age
I think I need to plan ahead
and not just fooling around. N: Fine then
let me ask you this: If you suddenly became rich
what would you do? J: If I suddenly became rich
I wish to spend about half of the money to build a technical school in developing countries like Malaysia and Brazil. This is a school that trains people in specialized technologies
hence improving the technological development there. I would use the remaining money to buy a lot of mercial and residential properties as an investment. R: I agree with you. Building schools can draw in more people for advancing the technological development. V: I don’t think so. Excessive trading of mercial and residential properties will limit their values. N: This is just Jason's idea. Don’t be serious. How about you Rita? R: If I got rich suddenly
first I would give 10% of the money to elderly homes
orphanages or other charity anizations. And then I would buy a piece of land
build a 7-storey building with a flat roof
including a lift and a staircase in the building. The ground floor would have half the space set up as a store and the other half as the car park. I can rent out the flat on the first floor and my family would live on the second floor and use the roof. I would buy a minivan
a Mercedes-Benz and o motorcycles. If there was still money left
I would go on a round-the-world trip
of which the destinations would include the North Pole and the South Pole. M: What a good idea to give back to the munity and help those in need. Building buildings creates jobs. N: I don’t agree with you. Making preparations for your family so that they don't need to work may make your family members unwilling to seek for proper jobs and doing nothing all the day. 后面请看意见 2013-07-19 22:31:40 补充： R: How about you
Vicky? V: If I suddenly [struck] it rich
of course I would buy a business that would bring in [continuous] ine and do all the other [stuffs in] my leisure. First I would buy a nice new car
and [also a] house. When I was a child
I [wished] to be a landlady. 2013-07-19 22:34:30 补充： Mm…..If I had a house
[I would] rent [it] out after I purchase a new [house]. [Second]
I would open a coffee shop. My shop [would] mainly [sell] coffee and delicious cakes. 2013-07-19 22:41:19 补充： Finally
I would set up trust funds for animals
and [give money to charity] to help the poor and the sick. J: In my opinion
we were raising [funds] for our school
an animal charity or helping [the sick]. 2013-07-19 22:45:48 补充： N: If people suddenly became rich they [would] spend [money] as fast as possible. They could spend [it] freely. R: [Moreover]
they would change their lifestyle [pletely]. They [may] do some selfish things too
[like] buying [expensive clothes and foods] for themselves [only to] show off their 2013-07-19 22:49:22 补充： lavish lifestyle. [What do you think] Niki? N: If I were you
I would run a financial investment pany with all employees successful in their fields in order to help more people to get wealthy. I would go to New Zealand to enjoy rural life [there] when this aim [is] reached.
先说一点，我认为 对话中的would其实全应该用will...(或有些past tense(became)等应用present tense)因为if xxx then yyy本身已经是假设性，当然你可以用would来表达虚构...但除了If I were you
...I would 那句较为合理之外...其他的讲论都是那人本身第一身表达对话，所以除非常中的东西只是幻想(一定无法实现)的表达才会用would past participle. 以上是我对英语语法(真实英语人讲法)的认识...你可再参考其他英语老师的意思 以下只能节录部份修正用词的错误(时态/tense的不修改了)建议: J: If I suddenly became rich
I wish to spent about half of the money... V: I don’t think so []; excessive trading of mercial and residential properties will inhibit their values. [这句跟前句在讲的东西不同(建学校跟商住楼不是同一种的交易)…是另一话题...如何I don’t this so?反而这段应该放在R和M之后或最后.] N: This is just Jason’s idea
don’t be serious
how about you
Rita? N: I don’t agree with you. Making preparations for your family
so they no need to work
it may cause family members unwilling to seek proper jobs and doing nothing all day. V: If I suddenly strike it rich
of course I would buy a business that would bring in [] continuous ine
then ...
I had the vision of being a landlady.
I think I need to plan ahead
and not just fooling around. N: Fine then
let me ask you this: If you suddenly became rich
what would you do? J: If I suddenly became rich
I wish to spend about half of the money to build a technical school in developing countries like Malaysia and Brazil. This is a school that trains people in specialized technologies
hence improving the technological development there. I would use the remaining money to buy a lot of mercial and residential properties as an investment. R: I agree with you. Building schools can draw in more people for advancing the technological development. V: I don’t think so. Excessive trading of mercial and residential properties will limit their values. N: This is just Jason's idea. Don’t be serious. How about you Rita? R: If I got rich suddenly
first I would give 10% of the money to elderly homes
orphanages or other charity anizations. And then I would buy a piece of land
build a 7-storey building with a flat roof
including a lift and a staircase in the building. The ground floor would have half the space set up as a store and the other half as the car park. I can rent out the flat on the first floor and my family would live on the second floor and use the roof. I would buy a minivan
a Mercedes-Benz and o motorcycles. If there was still money left
I would go on a round-the-world trip
of which the destinations would include the North Pole and the South Pole. M: What a good idea to give back to the munity and help those in need. Building buildings creates jobs. N: I don’t agree with you. Making preparations for your family so that they don't need to work may make your family members unwilling to seek for proper jobs and doing nothing all the day. 后面请看意见 2013-07-19 22:31:40 补充： R: How about you
Vicky? V: If I suddenly [struck] it rich
of course I would buy a business that would bring in [continuous] ine and do all the other [stuffs in] my leisure. First I would buy a nice new car
and [also a] house. When I was a child
I [wished] to be a landlady. 2013-07-19 22:34:30 补充： Mm…..If I had a house
[I would] rent [it] out after I purchase a new [house]. [Second]
I would open a coffee shop. My shop [would] mainly [sell] coffee and delicious cakes. 2013-07-19 22:41:19 补充： Finally
I would set up trust funds for animals
and [give money to charity] to help the poor and the sick. J: In my opinion
we were raising [funds] for our school
an animal charity or helping [the sick]. 2013-07-19 22:45:48 补充： N: If people suddenly became rich they [would] spend [money] as fast as possible. They could spend [it] freely. R: [Moreover]
they would change their lifestyle [pletely]. They [may] do some selfish things too
[like] buying [expensive clothes and foods] for themselves [only to] show off their 2013-07-19 22:49:22 补充： lavish lifestyle. [What do you think] Niki? N: If I were you
I would run a financial investment pany with all employees successful in their fields in order to help more people to get wealthy. I would go to New Zealand to enjoy rural life [there] when this aim [is] reached.
先说一点，我认为 对话中的would其实全应该用will...(或有些past tense(became)等应用present tense)因为if xxx then yyy本身已经是假设性，当然你可以用would来表达虚构...但除了If I were you
...I would 那句较为合理之外...其他的讲论都是那人本身第一身表达对话，所以除非常中的东西只是幻想(一定无法实现)的表达才会用would past participle. 以上是我对英语语法(真实英语人讲法)的认识...你可再参考其他英语老师的意思 以下只能节录部份修正用词的错误(时态/tense的不修改了)建议: J: If I suddenly became rich
I wish to spent about half of the money... V: I don’t think so []; excessive trading of mercial and residential properties will inhibit their values. [这句跟前句在讲的东西不同(建学校跟商住楼不是同一种的交易)…是另一话题...如何I don’t this so?反而这段应该放在R和M之后或最后.] N: This is just Jason’s idea
don’t be serious
how about you
Rita? N: I don’t agree with you. Making preparations for your family
so they no need to work
it may cause family members unwilling to seek proper jobs and doing nothing all day. V: If I suddenly strike it rich
of course I would buy a business that would bring in [] continuous ine
then ...
I had the vision of being a landlady.
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