Question

请高手帮忙看一下这句话准确否？地道吗？

I observed that beautiful views in these places completely owed to the effective measures used to be performed.

Answer 1

你是不是想说：我发现这些地方之所以有美丽的风景，都要归功于曾经采取过的有效措施。
我认为你可以把i observe，放到句子中间，可以使句子看起来不那么长。或者把effective measures used to be performed 这层意思放到句首表达，似乎这样会更地道一点。
比如， As far as I observed, the effective measures used to be performed in these places did all the contribution for the beautiful views existing now.
不知道这样可不可以，还请大家多指教！

Answer 2

太长了，不好！

Answer 3

应该这么说

i observed that the beautiful views in these places are completely owed to the effective measures that are taken.

Answer 4

你使用的从句和修饰太多了，可以用逗号断开，要不就写成两个句子会比较容易被人看懂。

Answer 5

不准确.我是托福4级的,这种东西辨别的很容易.