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On one day, when I was a cafe in honolulu,I saw sailor watching a bright young woman carefully. The woman looked quite sadly. He walked toward her and starting searching for anything on the ground at her feet. Before long, she asked him if he has lost something. The sailor turned very seriously, "yes." he said,"I'm looking for a smile was lost." Slowly there had a smile on the woman's face. That sailor told her what was just the one he was looking for.

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Answer 1

On （去掉ON）one day, when I was (加in)(在咖啡店里） a cafe in honolulu,I saw （a）（泛指）sailor watching a bright young woman carefully. The woman looked quite sadly（sad)(look 是系动词）. He walked toward her and starting（started)(和walked并列） searching for anything（something) (开始找什么东西）on the ground at her feet. Before long, she asked him if he has （had)(过去完成时）lost something. The sailor turned very seriously, "yes." he said,"I'm looking for a smile （that）（定语从句）was lost." Slowly（quickly）（根据句意 很快这名妇女就笑了）） there had a smile on the woman's face. That sailor told her what (it)(指微笑）was just the one he was looking for.