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英语达人帮我看一篇我写的小短文~（英语老师更好）

英语作文I am a middle school student and I study in Class 1 ,Grade 3 .After I entered the Grade 3 ,I feel very nervous because I will have to pass the final exam before I graduate from the middle school.But in these day ,I work hard at school and relax at home .And I think it is ok.I will work hard than before .For example ,I will read more books . Anyway ,I believe noting is impossible and I will pass th final exam successfully ! 就是考试的小作文，麻烦帮我看看有没有语法错误，得个分更好~（满分15）

Answer 1

I am a middle school student and I am in Class 1 ,Grade 3 .After I entered the Grade 3 ,I felt very nervous because I will have to pass the final exam before I graduate from the middle school.But during this time,I work hard at school and relax at home .And I think it is ok.I will work harder than before .For example ,I will read more books and spend more time on my study. Anyway ,I believe noting is impossible and I will pass the final exam successfully

Answer 2

I am a middle school student and I study in Class 1 ,Grade 3 .After I enter the Grade 3 ,I feel very nervous because I will have to pass the final exam before I graduate from the middle school.But in these day ,I work hard at school and relax at home .And I think it is ok.I will work harder than before .For example ,I read more books . Anyway ,I believe noting is impossible and I will pass the final exam successfully

Answer 3

在英文里面没有middle school 这么一说。 因为在英文里 初中 叫 junior high school 然后高中叫 high school. 说 Middle school 直接是从中文直译的 （但是我想你用Middle shool ，老师应该不会说什么吧）。 第二句里面，你都已经说了是在上了初三后， 为什么 because 后面还要用 I will 呢？ I will 是指 我将来会， 我将会。 所以应该是 I have to XXXX, 或者改成 I need to XXXX. 如果你真的想拿好分，我建议你把第三局开头的 but 改成 however ， 因为在正式英文的学做里面 but 是不可以作为开头的。 and 也是一样，在正式的写作里是不可以放在句子开头。 但是接下来你写的我有些没有看懂。 你说， （但是在这些日子里，我在学校很努力的学习回到家后就放松了。 我认为这是可以的。 我会比以前更努力。 ） 我觉得。。你的意思表达的有问题，为什么你回家就放松了你就这样是可以的，然后接下来就说我会比以前更努力。？ 是否可以说一下你的意思，这样我才可以帮助你改这一部分。 接下来的部分就没有问题了。。。 其实我认为总体来说你写的很好， 只是有一些小小的问题。