Question

求英语大神帮忙翻译！不要百度翻译或有道机器翻译得那种

经过一个学期写作的学习，我知道了许多自己的不足。比如说还不会正确的运用各种句型的表达方式，有时候总是会犯一些小错误。在从句的使用上，我总是会出一些小状况。在便条的写作上，我有时候会忘记写日期以及段首空两格。在日期的格式上也要注意。有时候我会希望用一些特别的句式，以至于使用不当而造成了扣分。我觉得我以后得用一些有把握的句型。在英语写作方面，我会有一些中式英文的表达方式，这提醒我平时要多注意一些英文的写作思维方式。在写作上，我应该多避免重复运用同一个词，要注意词汇的积累，可以在表达同一个意思时，用不同的单词来表达。在平时遵从老师的建议，对自己的作文多做修改润色。我相信，只有这样，我的写作才能有所提高。

Answer 1

After writing a semester of study, I know less than many of his. For example, also expression not the correct use of various patterns, sometimes will always make mistakes. In use, I will always be a small condition. In the note writing, I sometimes forget to write the date and period of the first two blanks. In the date format should also pay attention to. Sometimes I want to use some special sentence patterns, that caused the deduction. I think I could use some certain sentence after. In English writing, I will have the expression patterns of some Chinese English, this reminds me to usually pay more attention to some English writing way of thinking. In writing, I should avoid using the same word, should pay attention to the accumulation of vocabulary, can express the same meaning, different words are used to express. In usually follow the teacher's advice, on his composition more polished. I believe, only in this way, I am writing to improve.

Answer 2

After a semester studying writing, I know a lot of their own deficiencies. For example, will not use the correct expression of various sentences, sometimes always make some small mistakes. The use of the clause, and I will always be some small state. On the note writing, I sometimes forget to write the date and the first two cells empty segment. Also note that the format of the date. Sometimes I want to use some special sentence that improper use of the points. I think I'll have to use some grasp of sentence. In English writing, I have some Chinese expressions in English, which reminds me always pay more attention to some ways of thinking in English writing. In the writing, I should be more use to avoid repeating the same word, pay attention to the accumulation of vocabulary, you can express the same meaning, using different words to express. In peacetime comply with the teacher's suggestions do modify their essay polish. I believe that the only way my writing can be improved.