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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Al Smith, Governor of New York State, was born very poorly. He had less education in school, but he worked very hard and won great successes. One day, he paid a visit for the state prison at Sing Sing. The head of the prison asked Mr. Smith say something to the prisoners. He has never spoken to this kind of audience before, so he did not know where to begin. Finally he said, “My fellow citizens…” and then he remembered that when a man goes to the prison, he is no longer a citizen. He began again, “My fellow prisoners…” That wasn’t sound right. At last he said, “Well, however, I’m glad to see many of you here today.”

Answer 1

小题1:poorly—poor 小题2:less education—little education 小题3:successes—success 小题4:a visit for—a visit to 小题5:^ say—to say 小题6:has never—had never 小题7:where to begin—how to begin 小题8:the prison 小题9:wasn’t sound—didn’t sound 小题10:however—anyhow/anyway

小题1:此处poor修饰的是Smith，修饰名词用形容词。 小题2:此处没有比较的含义，education是不可数名词，故用little 小题3:success是不可数名词 小题4:固定短语 pay a visit to参观，拜访 小题5:固定用法ask sb to do sth 小题6:全文都是过去时，而此处指的是之前的，所以是过去的过去 小题7:根据文章意思，可知，此处讲的是方法，而不是方向。意为他不知道该怎样开始。 小题8:此处prison不是特指 坐牢就是go to prison 小题9:因为sound 是动词，所以否定选择助动词didn’t。 小题10:however是转折，此处不是转折的意思。意为不管怎样，我很高兴在这里看到你们。