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英语短文改错 As my mother andfather was always busy working,so I was often at home by myself.I felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself.One day,in my way home from school,I saw a men living in the park.he was wearing dirty and worn-out clothes.he gave me a big smile when he saw me .he looked if he was the happiest man in the world.looked at him, I realized how luckily I really was. I have. enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had. hardworking. parents who really cared about him.I realized how grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.
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Answer 1

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As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home by myself. I felt bored all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, on my way home from school, I saw a man living in the park . he was wearing dirty and worn-out clothes. he gave me a big smile when he saw me . he looked as if he was the happiest man in the world. looking at him, I realized how lucky I really was. I had. enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had. hardworking. parents who really cared about me. I realized how grateful I was to my parents was for all that I had.

Answer 2

As my mother and father was (were) always busy working,(去掉so) I was often at home by myself.I felt boring (bored) all the time and I felt sorry for myself.One day,in (on) my way home from school,I saw a men(man) living in the park.he was wearing dirty and worn-out clothes.he gave me a big smile when he saw me .he looked as if he was(were) the happiest man in the world.looking at him, I realized how luckily(lucky) I really was. I have. enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had. hardworking. parents who really cared about him(me).I realized how grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.