Question

短文改错

Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movieabout mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was such poor that she had to send him to a rich manwho had none child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,which is an old lady.He didn't care too much about him, for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness quiet,and on her bed the doctor fonund a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.
Everybody in the theatre was moved.
共十处错误，帮忙看哈，谢啦！！

Answer 1

1.went to see a movie
2.about a mother
3.such---so
4.none--no
5.late--later
6.which is--which was
7.He didn't care too much about him----
He didn't care too much about her
8.for--because
9.quiet--quietly
10.had wanted--wanted

Answer 2

更正在括号处标明！总共十处错误！
Mr.
Li
is
a
well-known
doctor
in
our
city.
Kind【and】patient,
he
is
always
ready
to
do
what
he
can【加入to】help
his
patients.
One
day
he
learned
from
the
medical
magazine
that
patients
will
feel【less】pain
if
pleasant
music
is
played
to
them.
Soon
he
got
an
office【of】his
own.
So
he
decided
to
have
【beautiful】music【played】in
his
waiting-room.
However,
【去掉on】one
morning,
an
old
lady
who
was
sitting
in
the
crowded
waiting-room
became
angry
while【listening】to
the
music.
She
said,
“We
【are】all
waiting
to
see
the
doctor,
but
he’s
just
playing
the
violin
in
his
office
instead
of
doing【his】work.”

Answer 3

Dear
Jim
I'd
like
to
tell
you
something
more
about
our
school
sports
meet．It
was
holding(holden)
on
Oct
6，which
was
a
fine
day．There
were
over
1,000
students
and
teachers
attend
(attending)it．Wang
Lin，a
student
from(of)
my
class
won
the
100-meter
race．He
finish(finished)
the
race
in
12.6
seconds
and
broke
in(in删除）
the
school
record．The
spots
meet
was
really
success（successful)．That
Was
(was)because
we
were
all
trying
to
do
my
(our)best．
Althought
I
Was
(was)not
one
of
the
winner(winners),
I
Was(was)
proud
of
that(that变成what)
we
had
done．
Looking
forward
to
receiving
your
letter
Yours，
Li
Ping
B
A
group
of
scientists
were
planning
to
go
to
countryside
to
do
a
scientific
research
in
order
to
find
out
that
(that删除）whether
the
environment
of
the
country
had(been)
polluted．On
arrival，they
started
to
check
the
air
and
water．To
our(their)
surprise，they
found
how
terribly(terrible)
the
situation
Was．They
could
see
the
serious
pollution．Look(looking)
into
the
cause，
they
persuade(persuaded)
the
government
to
pass
the
law
to
protect（the)
environment
and
kept
the
balance
of
nature.
Now
everything
has
(been)changed.
Birds
are
singing
while
tree
and
grass
are
waving.

Answer 4

went to 后加see
toched改成touching
such poor 改成 so poor
received改成accepted
twenty years late 中late改成later
which is an old lady中which 改成who
which is an old lady中is改成was
He didn't care too much about him中him改成her
a serious illness quiet中quiet改成quietly
He had wanted to call her mother去掉had

Answer 5

I
was
late
for
class
again
in(去掉in)
this
morning
,It
was
the
six(sixth)
time
I
had
been
late
for
class
,so
I
was
asking(asked)
to
go
to
Miss
Wang's
office
after
school.He
said,"Angthing
you
repeat(repeated)
twenty
times
is
yours
forever.Saying
no
to
a
bad
habit
is
not
enough.We
should
replace
it
with
(a)good
one
.If
any
behaviour
,good
and(改为or)
bad
,is
often
repeated,
it
becomes
stronger
and
less
(改为more)powerful."Hearing
what
Miss
Wang
said,
I
came
to
realizing(realize)
I
was
wrong,I've
made
up
my
minds(mind)
to
get
up
early
in
the
morning,and
I'll
never
be
late
for
class
again.I
believe
how
(去掉how)I
can
make
it.完全正确。