Question

这句话有英语语法错误吗？

I plan to concentrate on study and research in machine learning. And if I could have the chance to study here, I will take 吴恩达’s course and read 周志华’s watermelen book in the next few months.
补充：watermelen book 指西瓜书，这个专业通用的称呼

Answer 1

I plan to concentrate on the study and research in machine learning.

And if I could have the chance to study here， I would take 吴‘s course and read 周’s watermelen book in the next few months.

个人认为concentrate on后接名词形式的话动词用ing形式，这里的study 和 research表示名词的研究的意思，可以在前面加the 显得更加通顺，然后后面的一句话全部都是虚拟语气，就建议把will 也变成would 这样前后达成一致。修改成上述的形式，修改处已经加粗处理。