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请帮忙翻译汪国真的诗—《思念》，要求忠实原文，充分表达原文思想，语言流畅。
思念
我叮咛你的
你说 不会遗忘
你告诉我的
我也 全都珍藏
对于我们来说
记忆是飘不落的日子
——永远不会发黄
相聚的时候 总是很短
期待的时候 总是很长
岁月的溪水边
捡拾起多少闪亮的诗行
如果你要想念我
就望一望天上那
闪烁的繁星
有我寻觅你的
目——光
"目——光" 翻译成imaginative-------ness ，这不是想象的意思吗，算忠实原文吗？我四级528，但翻译不行，请多多指教！
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Answer 1

《思念》-汪国真 〈yearn〉-Wang Guozhen
思念 Yearn
我叮咛你的 What I've baden you,
你说 不会遗忘 you said,its never gotta be sank into oblivion
你告诉我的What You've told me ,
我也 全都珍藏i also, shall always treasure them all
对于我们来说 To us
记忆是飘不落的日子 Memories are like the persistent days
——永远不会发黄 will never turn yellowing
相聚的时候 总是很短 At the time of togetherness,its always so short
期待的时候 总是很长At the time of expectation,its always so long
岁月的溪水边The Stream side of the years
捡拾起多少闪亮的诗行has picked up countless twinkling stich
如果你要想念我 Once if you expect to miss me
就望一望天上那 Do look up
闪烁的繁星 at those glittery stars heavenly!
有我寻觅你的 (coz)inside is my sight seeking for you
目——光 imaginative-------ness

译：留学语言学者---顾琼雯

Answer 2

Yearning 思念

what I told you in times 我叮咛你的
you said you would never forget 你说 不会遗忘
what you told me 你告诉我的
as well, I'll cherish forever 我也 全都珍藏
for us 对于我们来说
memory is a leaf, floating but never landing,记忆是飘不落的日子
and also never withers 永远不会发黄
It's always short of the time together相聚的时候 总是很短
It's always long of expection期待的时候 总是很长
On the side of years' brook岁月的溪水边
pick up a lot of brilliant verses 捡拾起多少闪亮的诗行
If you miss me 如果你要想念我
look to the sky 就望一望天上那
numerous blinking stars闪烁的繁星
there's my eyes in search of you 有我寻觅你的
目——光

Answer 3

《思念》-汪国真 〈yearn〉-Wang Guozhen
Yearn
What I've baden you,
you said,its never gotta be sank into oblivion
What You've told me ,
i also, shall always treasure them all
To us
Memories are like the persistent days
will never turn yellowing
At the time of togetherness,its always so short
At the time of expectation,its always so long
The Stream side of the years
has picked up countless twinkling stich
Once if you expect to miss me
Do look up
at those glittery stars heavenly!
(coz)inside is my sight seeking for you
imaginative-------ness

Answer 4

Yearning

What I bid you
you said you would never forget
What you told me
I shall also enshrine
For us memory is a floating leave that never falls ------never turns yellow
Reunion is always very short
While waiting always very long
By the brook of time
many glistening verses are gleaned
If you miss me
just take a look at the twinkling stars
in the sky
They shed the same light in my eyes which are looking for you.

Answer 5

Missing
I urge you
You said Cannot forget
You tell me
I also All collects
Regarding us
The memory is the day which flutters does not fall
--Never can turn yellow
Gathers time Very is always short
Anticipation time Very is always long
Nearby years mountain stream
Picks line which picks up how many to glisten
If you must think of me
Looks space that
Twinkle stars
Has me to search you
Item--Light

Answer 6

I miss you warn you that it will not forget you told me I have all collections for us memory is not floating down the days -- will never yellow spend time always looking short time is always a very long time in the water while Pick up the number of sparking verse, if you want to miss, I look at the sky then left the stars that I find your head -- -