Question

英语高手来~

下面的英语段落 请高手来帮我修改修改， 弄的更简洁点。看下有没语法错误。 ..

There are two lifestyle of you.
The first way is living as a grass.
Though you are living in the world and growing up every year.
But you are a grass after all.
You absorb the rain and soak up the sunshine.
But you won't grow up to be great one in the world.
People can stamp on you .But people won't be painful due to you are suffering the pain.
peopel won't mercy on you as you have been stamped on.
because they themself don't notice you.
so Each one of us should grow up as a tree.
Even if we are nobody at present and even if You are trampled into soil.
But as long as you get the seeds of trees . you remains can absorb the soil that contains valuable nutrients and grow to be maturely.
Finally when you grow up to be big trees .
people can notice you in a place far away .
Approaching you can give people a piece of green.
Alive is a beautiful scenery .
Death is still the pillars of the talents.
no matter being alive or being dead ,you are useful,
This is a man in each of our students should be Regarded as the standard of conducting yourself and be regarded as the standard how to grow up.

Answer 1

There are two lifestyles for you.
The first one is living as a grass.
Although you are living in the world and growing up every year，
you are a grass ，after all.
You absorb the rain and soak up the sunshine.
But you won't grow up to be a great one in the world.
People may stamp on you .But they won't be painful when you are suffering the pain.
peopel won't mercy on you as you have been stamped on.
because they themselves don't notice you.
so each of us should grow up as a tree.
Even if we are nobody at present and even if You are trampled into soil.
As long as you get the seeds of trees . you can still absorb the soil that contains valuable nutritions and grow to be mature.
Finally， when you grow up to be big trees .
people can notice you far away .
Approaching you can give people a piece of green
Living is a beautiful scenery .
Death is still the pillars of the talents.
no matter being alive or being dead ,you are useful,
This is a man who us students should be Regarded as the standard of conducting yourself and be regarded as the standard of how to grow up.

本文貌似写人生的两种选择：小草和大树
小草被人忽视，大树受人重视。
然后上升到现实层面，号召学生以此为标准来发展自己。
呵呵 提几点建议：
1.搞清连接词之间的搭配，不能用错。比如although|though 和but 是不能连用的。
2.同一事物，最好使用不同单词表达，符合英语为文习惯。
3.短句要正确。
很抱歉我不知道你为文的感情色彩，仅作硬伤上的大致修改，不能详尽，仅供参考。如有疑问，后续作答。

呵呵希望有所帮助

Answer 2

我修改了一下，尽量把语法和单词错误更正了过来。

There are two ways of living.
The first way is to live as grass.
Though you are living and growing every year.
You are still grass after all.
You absorb the rain and soak up the sunshine.
But you won't grow up to be the great one in the world.
People can trample on you. But they don’t feel it and you are suffering the pain.
People won't have mercy on you as you are trampled upon.
Because they themselves don't notice you.
So every one of us should grow up as a tree.
Even if we are nobody at present and even if you are trampled into soil.
But as long as you get the seeds of trees, you can utilize the soil that contains valuable nutrients and grow to be mature.
Finally when you grow up to be big trees.
People can notice you in places far away.
Approaching you, people will get a piece of green.
Life is beautiful scenery.
Death is still the pillars of the talents.
No matter being alive or being dead, you are useful.
This is a man that each of our students should regard as the standard of conducting yourselves and the principle to follow.

Answer 3

蔬菜应该有种子啊？怎么会没有种子呢？像刀豆，不是就是有的吗？老了的刀豆里面的豆子，晒干以后，就是种子啊？