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LastSundayIwashelpingmyfatherinhisteahousewhenaforeignvisitorenteredin.Igreetedherwit...
Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has been in China and so far she had enjoined her stay there.All the people she met in the country were friendly for her.In the late afternoon I showed her around our town.After she left,Judy thanked me for my kind.Besides,she praised me for my spoken English.
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Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in(1、去掉in). I greeted her with a warmly(2、改为warm) smile and talked with her in English. The young lady, who called her(3、改为herself) Judy, came from Canada. She told me that it was the first time she has been(4、改为was) in China and so far she had enjoied(5、改为enjoyed) her stay there(6、改为here). All the people she met in the country were friendly for(7、改为to) her. In the late(8、Late放在开头) afternoon I showed her around our town. After(9、改为Before) she left, Judy thanked me for my kind(10、改为kindness). Besides, she praised me for my spoken English.
Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in(1、去掉in). I greeted her with a warmly(2、改为warm) smile and talked with her in English. The young lady, who called her(3、改为herself) Judy, came from Canada. She told me that it was the first time she has been(4、改为was) in China and so far she had enjoied(5、改为enjoyed) her stay there(6、改为here). All the people she met in the country were friendly for(7、改为to) her. In the late(8、Late放在开头) afternoon I showed her around our town. After(9、改为Before) she left, Judy thanked me for my kind(10、改为kindness). Besides, she praised me for my spoken English.
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你好:
第一排:in 改为:with
第二排:warmly 改为:warm 去掉 her
第三排:has 改为:had stay 改为:staying there 改为:here
第四排:for 改为:to
第五排:kind 改为:kindness for 改为:of
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第一排:in 改为:with
第二排:warmly 改为:warm 去掉 her
第三排:has 改为:had stay 改为:staying there 改为:here
第四排:for 改为:to
第五排:kind 改为:kindness for 改为:of
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是with his teahouse 还是entered with?
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last sunday I was... when ...entered=> last sunday when I was..., a foreign visitor entered in.
warmly => warm
who called her Judy=> herself
she has been in=> had been
she had enjoyed=>she enjoyed
her stay there=>here
were friendly for her=> to her
After she left=> before Judy left,
Judy thanked me=>she thanked me...
my kind=>kindness
追问
第9个改和不改有区别么?。。。。
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我觉得一句话中, 要先出现judy, 再出现代词she
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