Question

请问谁能帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误

原文：My favourite movie is transformer. This film was made in America. It used a lot of high-techs and computer special effects. I like it very much. This film has huge scenes and famous movie stars. Besides, it has good story, and it told me to respect anybody protects us. This film asked us to be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live in the danger. It also have a lot of robot troys I like. This is my favourite movie.

Answer 1

有的，三处
1,transformer要加s，t要大写
2,to respect anybody who protects us。这里先行词不可省，因为这里不是宾语从句。先行词也不做protect的宾语
3,robot troys不知道是什么东西。

追问

第一个问题解决了，第二有点不懂，能不能帮我改一下这个句子。第三个单词写错了，应该是robot toys

追答

第二个很简单的，你用我写的句子去替换就行了。

即把原句to respect anybody protects us改成to respect anybody who protects us。

这里不能省略who（who即先行词），因为who后的句子是anybody的定语，若不写，则主语不明。

省略先行词的情况有两种：

1. 先行词作从句的宾语；

2. 先行词做定语从句的主语。

PS:如果你是看不懂我说的先行词之类的名词，那就要补习一下语法了。因为这都是基础，我没办法解释这些名词...

去看看从句的定义吧～～

Answer 2

My favorite movie is transformer. This film was made in America. It used a lot of high-techs and computer special effects. I like it very much. This film has huge scenes and famous movie stars. Besides, it has good story, and it told me to respect anybody protects us. This film asked us to be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live in the danger. It also have a lot of robot troy I like. This is my favorite movie.

Answer 3

对了
很好要是再L加一点就很好了

追问

L是哪一个，在什么地方

追答

再弟三行的那个

Answer 4

很好，不错