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假如你是Ann请根据提示写一篇E-mail给你的好朋友Tony
1.国庆节和家人去了贵州黄果树旅游(travel)
2.看到了黄果树瀑布(wonderful fantastic exciting)
3.同时（at the same time）那里遇见了一个美国朋友 Victor（男）
4.我们一起聊天，还拍了很多相片，我们最后成了好朋友
Dear Tong,
My parents and I went Huangguoshu in Guizhou to travel on the National Day this year._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ann
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　　On Oct 1st, the National Day of China this year, dad, mom and I went to Beijing to have a vacation. I was so happy because it's the first time that I visit the Great Wall.
The Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders of the world.We took the bus to arrive at the foot of the Great Wall. I began to climb the dreamed Great Wall. At first I did not feel tired, but after I stepped a thousands of steps I felt tired and thirsty. At last, we stood on the highest point of the Great Wall. A Chinese saying goes like that, “you are not a real hero until you have climbed the Great Wall”. The view outside and inside the Great Wall was so beautiful in this autumn!What a wonder today!
　　National day was coming . i had seven days of holiday. our family had a vacation in beijing. it was a beautiful city. we stayed in a week. the hotel we lived in was very beautiful.we enjoyed the special coffee and listen to the popular music. we learned the people's lives and the custom there.we liked the beautiful view there !we more liked people there because they are friendly! i enjoyed myself. if i have the another chance, i would like to come.