Question

求打分``15分的作文 how to succeed in a job interview

老师只给这篇作文打7分。。为什么。。谁能告诉我理由。。为什么连及格分都没。。。？
For my own part i find that the essrntial factors of being successful in a job interview can be summarized as three parts . First of all ,giving the employer a great impression is one of the most important things .so in this part ,your appreance and way of communication may become the judgement of you .you ought to wear the formal clothes to show your emphasis on the interview and be flexible to answer the question asked. Secondly is to show the reasons and your abilities to get this posision.Then the professional knowledge and the personal ability can support you to close to the success. Finally,is the equally important thing just to be confidence without too much hesitations .To show yourself naturally ,to show your abilities confidently ,to show your decision firmly.

Answer 1

To show yourself naturally ,to show your abilities confidently ,to show your decision firmly.
这 没主句。

Finally,is the equally important thing just to be confidence without too much hesitations
没主语

Answer 2

完全的中式英语，个人认为，如果觉得我说的不对请不要对我抨击，我说的是实话。

Answer 3

个人而言，没有问题！或许是思路，调理上老师不满意！建议自己去问老师

Answer 4

作文要求是什么？
貌似写得很空。