Question

大家帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误？

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

有吗?

Answer 1

是孩子写的吧？总体来说挺不错，但是在初学阶段，最好避免用and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.这种从句，要把句子分开，说明白，可以说In the afternoon, my father asked me to help him water the plant. I finished the work and felt very happy, the flowers are smiling in the wind beautifully.

另外，最后一句应该用was而不是is。还有，unforgetive不好，可以换成外国人更加常用的amazing
祝你学习进步

Answer 2

help him water the plant 在water前加to

Answer 3

首先注意大小写吧！