Question

急急急急急急急急急，各位帮帮忙，修改一下我的英语作文，晚上10点以前，谢谢

nothing is impossible in my eyes
Everyone has a dream，every dreams will have a ladder，it makes everyone’ dream come true，it is insisted。If you want to make your dream come true，you will must after a long journey。And this will be a very difficult process。I think that a person only to pursue unremittingly，he can achieve the objective。You will can do anything you want as long as you unremittingly。

Answer 1

1 it makes everyone’s dream come true

2 if it is insisted 如果被坚持 应该加 if 吧。。。

3 you will must after a long journey 太过chinglish
建议改成 you will go through a lot of difficulties and suffer a lot .

4 process 是过程 应该用 task 任务 比较好 如果想用这个词 建议把difficult 改成 long

5 I think that only should a person need to purse unremittingly比较高端。。。so he can achieve。。。so 不能掉

6 You can do anything you want as long as you 不用 will 了
are unremitting 为什么 you 后面之间加副词 ==明显错了

7every dream

every 后面接名词 单数

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高一水平 如果有错误 请多指教

追问

it is insisted 如果被坚持？这个没用if，我的意思是这就是坚持
我的you后面没用副词，您指的哪一句

追答

我天 = =insist 是动词
it is persistence（毅力）
it is insisted 你这个意思是 它被坚持，，，，你肯定在上初中吧 加油哦

Answer 2

Everyone has dreams. For everydream there is a ladder leading to its success, which is persistence. If you want to make your dream come true, you must experience a long journey. And this will be a very difficult process。I think only those people who pursue unremittingly can achieve their objectives. Man can do things they want to do as long as they unremittingly work hard.

你的用词方面问题比较大，一般来说写文章用的主语不会是you 或 I 这样不正式的词，一般来讲用第三人称，或用people来代指比较好。

Answer 3

every dreams的dreams的s得去掉

Answer 4

第五行，把after改成experience
全篇全是l think.youwill，最好多用几个句式，比如not only.but also my opinion is之类的