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求高手帮忙写一篇英语作文,要好一点的

题目是My Views on the Significance of Children’s Being Independent
要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the significance of children’s being independent.

Answer 1

A girl is learning to ride a bike outside. But it is interesting to see that her parents and grandparent follow around her. What are they doing. They hold the bike carefully and tightly in case that the little girl won't fall down from it. What's more, her mother bring a medicial box with herself at all.
This cartoon reflected a very common phenomenon in china. Parents overlove their children without limitation and priciples. As a result, chinese children couldn't grow up independently and adapt to society quickly.
As far as i know, independence is a crucial criteria to judge a child whether he or she has grown up to be an adult. Therefore, what will happen if children grow without being indepent. Firstly, they won't respect their parents enough in the future. Secondly, they can't get on well with each other when they leave home. Because they will always treat theselfves as the centre part, just as their parents do at home. Thirdly, they can't get success without their parents. Whatever they do, independence is the motivation to keep them forward.
Independence makes a person strong, without it ,the children can't compete with others. At last, they will fall behind far away and be knocked out in socitey. Therefore, the right way to educate a child is to make him or her to be independent.
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Answer 2

A girl is learning to ride a bike outside. But it is interesting to see that her parents and grandparent follow around her. What are they doing. They hold the bike carefully and tightly in case that the little girl won't fall down from it. What's more, her mother bring a medicial box with herself at all.
This cartoon reflected a very common phenomenon in china. Parents overlove their children without limitation and priciples. As a result, chinese children couldn't grow up independently and adapt to society quickly.
As far as i know, independence is a crucial criteria to judge a child whether he or she has grown up to be an adult. Therefore, what will happen if children grow without being indepent. Firstly, they won't respect their parents enough in the future. Secondly, they can't get on well with each other when they leave home. Because they will always treat theselfves as the centre part, just as their parents do at home. Thirdly, they can't get success without their parents. Whatever they do, independence is the motivation to keep them forward.
Independence makes a person strong, without it ,the children can't compete with others. At last, they will fall behind far away and be knocked out in socitey. Therefore, the right way to educate a child is to make him or her to be independent.

Answer 3

西工大的吧。。