Question

用PET3或者CET4的水平，尽量写一片高分作文。谢谢

题目：大学生沉迷网游的现状和你对此的看法

Answer 1

尽力写下，我也才刚刚过了6级，用词什么的并不是很高端，不过楼主可以借鉴下思路：
About the game addicts
Many undergraduates lose their ambition when they are costing their youth in game.This is not rare around us.
Young as we are , we sometimes feel depressed about the world or ourselves for some real reasons .A man who is in a young age always wants success or fame, however this usually can not come true if he don't make good efforts. Just like someone's say :success is a double-edged sword, how we treat it usually decides how it treats us.
Young people like us undergraduates seems to have less resourses to succeed so some of us choose an easy way on the contrary and that is to game! Though our society has some responsibilities for making a so drastic competitive world for some perserveranceless students, they should more reflect on their own.Why not to try your best even if you may come to nothing, you will harvest maturit after all?
So I think that is just an excuse for escaping from the reality. The best way to get rid of infatuating the online games is to know yourself again.One who can identify himself can do things right.

我的写作思路是：先描述下为什么会有很多大学生迷恋网游，原因是巨大的社会压力和关于成功的强烈期望同自身的能力形成的巨大反差。然后批判了这种逃避的态度，最后给出建议：先认识自己，才能正确做事。