Question

根据所给图画，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。 ________________________________

根据所给图画，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

One day, Linda was on her way home. She saw a man ride a bike in front of him. Suddenly, a car ran against him at a high speed. The man fell to the ground and was hurt badly. But the driver didn’t stop to save the man. Instead, he drove his car away quickly. Linda ran fast to catch up with the car. And she called the police. Soon the policeman came. He scolded the driver. At last, the driver apologized to the man.

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，这样的作文我们必须要仔细观察图片，看清图片想要表达的意思，要对每一张图片所 表达的内容有正确的理解。这是写好作文的前提。通过观察可知，这四张图片讲述了一次交通事故，是一个骑自行车的人和一辆汽车。从图上可以看出，是这辆汽车的速度太快了。而且，这名司机在撞人后还逃跑了。所以这些细节的内容我们要表达清楚，将这个事故发生的时间、地点、人物、原因、结果等交代明白，完整的表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该主要使用一般过去时，所以要注意每句话中的动词，都要用过去式的形式。 【亮点说明】这篇作文写得还是比较优秀的。它以Linda为角度，把看到的一场交通事故叙述了下来。首先，作者交代了事故发生的时间和地点，One day, Linda was on her way home；接下来是这次事故中的双方以及事故的过程，She saw a man ride a bike in front of him. Suddenly, a car ran against him at a high speed. The man fell to the ground and was hurt badly.；然后是司机逃跑，Instead, he drove his car away quickly，这个句子中作者使用了一个单词instead，运用非常准确。最后是这次交通事故的处理，And she called the police. Soon the policeman came. He scolded the driver. At last, the driver apologized to the man。这篇作文对这次事件的叙述比较完整，表达比较准确。