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“Great Changes in My Hometown ”为题用英语写一篇短文描述家乡小镇所发生的变化。过去我住的一个小镇

“Great Changes in My Hometown ”为题用英语写一篇短文描述家乡小镇所发生的变化。过去我住的一个小镇周围都是树，没有高楼。那里的人们过着贫穷的生活。　　现在家乡发生了巨变，你到处能看到高楼大厦和工厂，许多人有了自驾车。但空气和水污染也变得越来越严重，山不绿了，水不净了，天不蓝了发挥1-2句...Great Changes in My Hometown

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I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There were no tall buildings. People there lived a poor life. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. You can see tall buildings and factories everywhere. Many people have their own cars. But air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. The mountains are not green, the rivers are not clean, and the sky is not blue. I think we must do something to stop pollution. I hope my hometown will be more beautiful in the future.

这是一篇给材料作文要求写一篇介绍自己家乡从过去到现在发生的一些变化。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不能遗漏要点。由于是介绍过去到现在的变化，故应特别注意时态的应用，介绍过去一般用过去时态，介绍现在用一般现在时态，展望将来则用将来时态。写作中注意表达的先后顺序，语义的 连贯性，注意英语表达的惯用句式，固定短语的应用，不犯语法错误。短文结尾要根据自己的看法，发表一点对于将来的展望，最少要写两句话，注意将来时态的应用。写好后多读几遍，适当修改。