Question

帮我写篇英语作文，大约五六句就行，初二的。。谢谢 具体如下

Answer 1

Well,
to
be
a
good
child,
I
as
a
child
myself
,
really
have
the
rights
to
say
something.

Everybody
has
his
own
opinion
about
the
question.
However,
I
want
to
talk
about
it
from
two
points.

First,
what
should
we
do
at
school?
Maybe
some
students’
answer
are
that
we
should
study
hard,
be
kind
to
classmates,
respect
your
teachers.
Of
course,
I
agree
with
it
totally.

Second,
when
we
are
at
home
to
be
our
parents’
good
boy
or
good
girl,
what
should
we
do?
The
most
important
thing
is
finishing
our
homework
all
by
ourselves.
Then
try
our
best
to
do
some
housework,
so
that
our
parents
will
not
be
so
tired
after
work..

To
be
a
good
child
is
not
diffcult.
I
hope
every
child
can
be
a
good
kid
not
only
at
school
but
also
at
home.

评 分
92分级 别优秀批 改
1.
第二段中的Maybe
some
students’
answer
are
that，中的系动词使用错误，要注意单复数一致，该句子的主语是answer所以显然are应该改为is.

2.
同样第二段中的respect
your
teachers，中的your使用不当。同学需注意，整个句子的大环境是we
should
do
something，
所以
自然这里也要写为respect
our
teachers比较恰当。

整体感觉不错，条理清楚，句式也有变化，而且加入了一些口语的元素。错误也并不是很多，在此提出表扬。希望该同学继续努力，取得更大进步