Question

Does this sentence correct??

Answer 1

The logic is as follows: (1) There are a number of subsidies. (2) We are talking about removing (cancelling) one of them. (3) One of these subsidies appears to be good to the environment. (4) So
if we remove this subsidy
the consequence is bad to the environment. (5) This kind of subsidy is the subsidy to manage soil erosion. The expression can be *** ysed as follows: The one kind of subsidy (.......adj. clause......) was the subsidy to manage soil erosion. ( that appeared to have been bad for the environment if removed ) The sentence structure is correct
but the expression too classic. Not remended for modern English.
The one kind of subsidy......was the subsidy to manage soil erosion. 先拆开of which中间作为解释这种subsidy(资助)[第一个字系咪串错了]，全句意是说这种subsidy是众多subsidy中用作处理泥土流失的方案。 of which removal appeared to have been bad for the environment 中间部份只是解释这subsidy的考虑(of which)是除去这些资助(removal)看来(appeared)是对环境做成坏处(to have been bad for the environment). 这似乎是法律或论文的plex词句结构。
One kind of subsidies was the subsidy to manage soil erosion. The removal of this subsidy appeared to have been bad for the environment. "of which removal appeared to have been bad for the environment" is a relative defining clause while "One kind of subsidies was the subsidy to manage soil erosion." is the main clause.
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