Question

how to write the application letter for school admission

Answer 1

Quote We are writing to apply for an admission opportunity for our son
Tom xxxxxxx
to your good school. Tom is now studying in xxxxxxxPrimary School. Like most parents in Hong Kong
we are facing a challenge in selecting a suitable secondary school for our son. We have visited your school during the school open day in March. We are impressed by the students academic achievements & the confidence shown in their demonstration of the result of their hard work. Surprisingly
Tom
just a primary five student showed his interest in participating in the various games arranged by your students. When we left your school
Tom told us that he has decided to try his best to get into ABC Secondary School. From March till now
Tom has been working on his own initiative and he did prove his desirability of being your student. Not only did he get a remarkable result for the school examination
he also managed to obtain a reference letter from his Principal. We therefore enclose his schools academic reports and the said reference letter for your consideration and hope that you would return us with an application form and grant Tom an opportunity for interview. Thank you for your kind attention and in case you need further information
please give us a call at 9999999(Father) or 96666666 (Mother). Unquote This is my position and I used for my sons application