Question

请大家帮我看看英语作文有什么语法错误，谢~

< What should we do when there is a fire?>
When there is a fire,we must be calm.First,go to the door of our rooms,touch the surface of the door.If it's very hot ,remember to open it.Next,wet some towels and put them along the bottom of the door and wait.when you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout.Fireman will find you and take you away.
That's all we should do when there is a fire.
* 恩，英文作文就写到这里。麻烦各位高人帮小妹一个忙^^。因为明天就要考试了嘛，我猜测写这篇作文的可能性蛮大的。虽然现在我没有积分，但我已经在努力回答别人的问题的呢！我一定会把积分补上的！考试为重。此事非同小可。
悬赏财富一定会在10分以上的，请大家相信我。再次说一声谢谢了！真的很麻烦大家，我的作文貌似也蛮枯燥的吧！真的是太不好意思了。
纠正一个地方啊！是remenber not to open it.

Answer 1

< What you should do when firing?>
When firing,you must be calm.First of all,you should touch the door of your room.If it's very heated,you must not open it.Next,you had better put some wet towels on the ueface of door and make sure there no room for the somke to rush in.Then,you have to wait.When you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout oudly.Fireman will find you and save you.
That's all you should do when there is a fire.
这是我给你改的，是我觉得比较好的表达，你可以斟酌使用。站在给别人建议的角度写的。

Answer 2

要分段吧，还有是remember not to open it 吧！when you hear，为什么要加ing?the fire alarm ring（响）吧？最后一段是firemen用复数！结尾用that are....吧？

Answer 3

when you hearing 改成hear 。。。arlarm going off .firemen 最后that is 改成 these are.

Answer 4

< What should we do when there is a fire?>
When there is a fire,we must be calm.First,go to the door of our rooms,touch the surface of the door.If it's very hot ,remember to open it.Next,wet some towels and put them along the bottom of the door and wait.when you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout.Fireman will find you and take you away.

Answer 5

When there is a fire,we must be calm.First,go to the door of our rooms,touch the surface of the door.If it's very hot ,remember to open it.Next,wet some towels and put them along the bottom of the door and wait.when you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout.Fireman will find you and take you away.
That's all we should do when there is a fire.