Question

写一篇关于销售服务的英语作文。急急急。在线等！！

要求1预测企业可能出现的问题
2认为“延长工作时间”建议是否可行？
3列举一两个你认为可行的方法
4说明你列举方法的原因

Answer 1

In current market, almost every enterprise have to face the fierce competetion to stay alive. Excellent service plays an important role in enhancing the company’s competence.
There are many problems existing for companies to offer service. For instance, the service quality is poor or provided not in time, all of which cause bad effects on company’s image. Perhaps some companies will prolong their working time to solve such problems. However, I don't assume this solution can really eliminate these existing problems. Because extended time means employees will be forced to sarcrifice their leisure time, which might results in tention and complaint.
As far as I’m concerned, I think it is advisible to improve the quality of service instead of merely increase working time. For most customers, they put great attachment on the quality of service. For example, our national brand Haier offer excellent after- sale service, which have gained vast praise as well as profits.
Overall , I think premium service can benefit both companies and the customers. Therefore, companies should pay more attention to the improvement of their service.
我感觉你的要点太多，所以前两点写在第二段里，后两点写在第三段里，而且举了个海尔的例子，也不知道你要求多少字，我刚统计下，已经有150个字左右呢。但愿能对你有帮助。