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II.Revisethefollowingparagraphsbymarkingtheplacesyoubelievetobewrong.Thenwriteyourcor...
II. Revise the following paragraphs by marking the places you believe to be wrong. Then write your corrections below the marked places. (5X 4, 20%)
16. The get-together was drawing near day by day. Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare work. The reservation of a table for eight people in the restaurant, the fruits for the party, the present for Mr. Shi, the games we could play. The present, we all agreed to buy an electric fan the hot weather.
17. Recruitment of new students lasted for three weeks. The students were from 31 provinces and. It was for the first time that UIBE recruited new students from Macao. When interviewing the new student from Macao, the tall and slim girl said that she received warm welcome when she came to the university. She told me that she felt the campus was big and beautiful. When being asked why she was enrolled for a university in mainland China, she answered that she wanted to be independent and learn knowledge of trade and management, UIBE was famous for those.
18. But the plan was cancelled by Liuyang, saying that she was old enough to live alone. “To me, campus life is mysterious and challengeable. I like my room mate, really. All of us come from different part with different thoughts, I have already learned a lot from others. Besides, the dining room is good, and we will have new dorm in November.”
19. The amount of new students accounts to about 2700, which is much more than previous years. As the new dormitory building is still under construction, the university has already set up six temporary buildings for new students. Though these buildings are decorated in a hurry, but with curtains and wardrobes.
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16. The get-together was drawing near day by day. Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare work. The reservation of a table for eight people in the restaurant, the fruits for the party, the present for Mr. Shi, the games we could play. The present, we all agreed to buy an electric fan the hot weather.
17. Recruitment of new students lasted for three weeks. The students were from 31 provinces and. It was for the first time that UIBE recruited new students from Macao. When interviewing the new student from Macao, the tall and slim girl said that she received warm welcome when she came to the university. She told me that she felt the campus was big and beautiful. When being asked why she was enrolled for a university in mainland China, she answered that she wanted to be independent and learn knowledge of trade and management, UIBE was famous for those.
18. But the plan was cancelled by Liuyang, saying that she was old enough to live alone. “To me, campus life is mysterious and challengeable. I like my room mate, really. All of us come from different part with different thoughts, I have already learned a lot from others. Besides, the dining room is good, and we will have new dorm in November.”
19. The amount of new students accounts to about 2700, which is much more than previous years. As the new dormitory building is still under construction, the university has already set up six temporary buildings for new students. Though these buildings are decorated in a hurry, but with curtains and wardrobes.
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16. 在一起天天临近。是负责它的我们的同学是繁忙的以准备工作。一张桌的保留为八个人在餐馆, 果子为党, 礼物为Shi, 我们能演奏的比赛先生。礼物, 我们所有同意买一台电扇热的天气。
17. 新学生的补充持续了三个星期。学生是从31 个省和。第一次是, UIBE 吸收了新学生从澳门。当采访新学生从澳门, 高和亭亭玉立的女孩说, 她接受了热烈欢迎当她走向大学。她告诉了我, 她感觉校园是大和美丽的。当被要求为什么她注册了为大学在中国大陆, 她回答说她想独立和学会贸易和管理知识, UIBE 是著名的为那些。
18. 但计划由Liuyang 取消了, 说, 她是足够老的单独居住。"对我, 校园生活神奇和challengeable 。我喜欢我的室伙伴, 真正地。我们大家来自用不同的想法另外部份, 我已经学会很多从其他人。其外, 餐厅是好的, 并且我们将有新宿舍在11月。"
19. 相当数量新学生认为到大约2700, 是更比往年。当新宿舍大厦仍然是建设中, 大学已经设定六个临时大厦为新学生。虽然这些大厦用帷幕和wardrobes 急忙装饰, 但。
（我的英语也不太好有些我也不知道）！！！
17. 新学生的补充持续了三个星期。学生是从31 个省和。第一次是, UIBE 吸收了新学生从澳门。当采访新学生从澳门, 高和亭亭玉立的女孩说, 她接受了热烈欢迎当她走向大学。她告诉了我, 她感觉校园是大和美丽的。当被要求为什么她注册了为大学在中国大陆, 她回答说她想独立和学会贸易和管理知识, UIBE 是著名的为那些。
18. 但计划由Liuyang 取消了, 说, 她是足够老的单独居住。"对我, 校园生活神奇和challengeable 。我喜欢我的室伙伴, 真正地。我们大家来自用不同的想法另外部份, 我已经学会很多从其他人。其外, 餐厅是好的, 并且我们将有新宿舍在11月。"
19. 相当数量新学生认为到大约2700, 是更比往年。当新宿舍大厦仍然是建设中, 大学已经设定六个临时大厦为新学生。虽然这些大厦用帷幕和wardrobes 急忙装饰, 但。
（我的英语也不太好有些我也不知道）！！！
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